Imperfect Timing

no timing is perfect
time remains a lie
for it is untruthful
and it is unjust
from its birth to
its death, time
is its own up and down,
until time is prized 
all of time is
imperfect time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 7:02 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Brian's "You Choose Again" contest Jesse. Love, Carol
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November 14, 2011 at 10:59 PM
AMEN, so it is! Congrats on your win, Jesse
Johnson Avatar
November 14, 2011 at 6:07 PM
A new way of looking at time. Congratulations Jesse. Love, Joyce
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November 14, 2011 at 5:37 PM
Congratulations Jesse on your worthy poem win, Agape, Moses
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November 14, 2011 at 3:20 PM
Congrats on your win with this wondeful piece...... Michael
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November 14, 2011 at 2:25 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Jesse
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