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Imperfect

Indented by harsh waves Injured by cold sharp rocks Inflicted by failures Irate at injustice I come to you naked Indolent, extinguished Illuminate me Lord Written on:02/27/2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/8/2017 9:12:00 AM
Perfect, your pen is not imperfect at all!
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Date: 3/4/2017 2:49:00 PM
We all meet our maker imperfect and bearing life's scars. Nicely expressed and congratulations Sara! :-)
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Date: 3/3/2017 1:45:00 PM
Powerfully written, Sara! Congrats! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/2/2017 3:36:00 AM
Beautiful surrender ... congratulations on your win ...
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Date: 3/1/2017 7:19:00 PM
Wonderful imagery.Congrats on your win, Sara.
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Date: 3/1/2017 5:10:00 PM
beautifully uplifting Sara:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:30:00 PM
wow, Sara. VERY well done!! Love your take on the word imperfect. Congrats for the win.
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Date: 3/1/2017 10:15:00 AM
This is lovely n lofty! Congrats!
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Date: 3/1/2017 3:37:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win in Pleiades I contest, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/28/2017 10:16:00 PM
Love this, Sara! Congrats!
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Date: 2/28/2017 9:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sara, well done :)
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Date: 2/28/2017 8:24:00 AM
As we all are, Mrs Sara. Great pleiades!
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Date: 2/27/2017 5:13:00 PM
oh I really like how you employed metaphor in this one. GREAT pleiades!
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