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Before Sol sinks into the pitch of night, cricket chirps echo bellowing bullfrogs. The sun bleeds red, inking the night with light; while woodpeckers drum on old hollow logs. Splintered silhouettes silently conjoin; flowing into ebon pools of twilight. The sun gilds the moon, two sides of one coin; golden disks, fueling life with their light. Ebony skies unveil the universe, encrusted with billions of twinkling gems. Splendiferous pink-colored clouds disperse; while flowers nod off, snoozing on their stems. Tethered to time's imperceptible string; we're somehow connected to everything.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/27/2020 6:28:00 PM
Another splendiferous write I love that word, you are a master wordsmith Emile!I must fave this one...wow that's two of yours today!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2020 8:13:00 AM
Thanks John, you always bring a smile to my day my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/27/2020 3:49:00 AM
This is brilliant, Emile, beautiful example for your contest:) belated congrats on your win too:)
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Date: 8/27/2020 6:10:00 AM
Thanks Joe, I appreciate your comments stay safe my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/3/2020 7:22:00 AM
Perfection Emile! How I loved the words splendiferous silhouettes...congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/3/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thanks so much Jeanne, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/2/2020 12:22:00 AM
You are a master of lipograms my friend. Your brilliant references and subtle emotions add to the grandeur of your muse. Congratulations on your win Emile :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/2/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your supportive comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/31/2020 11:01:00 PM
Emile, your mastery of poetry is breathtaking. The technical challenges of combining the constraints of a lipogram and sonnet seem formidable, yet you make it appear effortless. And the poetry you weave of sun and moon, not to mention your alliterations. I just love the line "Ebony cushions the whole universe". A Fave for me for this stunningly beautiful writing, my friend ~ John
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/1/2020 7:22:00 AM
Thanks so much John, you honor me, and I am grateful for you friendship my friend, Emile.

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