Impenetrable
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As dark clouds gather in the sky
Down where the river narrows
And Sprewell Bluff's craggy rocks rise
Great blue heron has flown and the sparrow
The river speedily flows on by
Its color no more red
But back to its normal brownish green
Washing rocks on the river bed
The gnarled sweet gum still stands 'pon roots
No longer attached to land
Most of its leaves now have turned red
Which will fall on the current or sand
A warm fall day with high moisture
Just enough to be uncomfortable
Yet~somehow a good feeling formed
Even his talk my thoughts impenetrable
Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2021
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