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Impaled Dreams

Impaled On your barbed tongue Insults glistening with spite Against your heart of thorns, bleeding Mine crying impaled tears A nail through our love Impaled forlornly with cupids’ arrow Poisoned by cruel words A dream promised impaled by abuse Written: 7-28-2019 Anthony Slausin Impaled Poetry Contest n/a Entered into John Hamilton n/a contest 8-9-19 3rd place

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Date: 8/13/2019 7:35:00 PM
Your potent poetry is so rich and captivating, Jeanne. A tragic beauty. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/10/2019 6:29:00 PM
This one really brings on a lump in the throat, I guess now I have something in my eye! Congrats Jeanne on a fine win!
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:53:00 AM
Beautiful flow, Jeanne. I am enjoying you today before a 4 hour car ride to see my mother.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/30/2019 9:38:00 AM
Enjoy your trip...I'm betting you'll have lots of poetry to write after/during your trip!
Date: 7/29/2019 4:57:00 PM
I've a lot to learn!! So well put together. RT
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/29/2019 6:30:00 PM
the contest was bubbling in the background for days before this came out.
Date: 7/29/2019 7:27:00 AM
I'm feeling this one today. a fave. x
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/29/2019 9:24:00 AM
I'm sorry to hear this...hugs needed for sure. xoxox
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 7/29/2019 7:28:00 AM
& good luck in the contest!
Date: 7/29/2019 5:03:00 AM
Cleverly penned, Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/29/2019 6:29:00 PM
thank you...

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