Impaled

Arrows fly causing chem trails, 
such crazy twisted cupid tales! 
Could have flown farther 
boomerang hit the archer;
Now they fall, a crush impales.

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/1/2024 5:54:00 PM

Dear Melani, Your poem is a whirlwind of imagery and emotion, blending the whimsical with the poignant. The metaphor of cupid's arrows and their unexpected consequences resonates deeply. Your limerick is unique twists on love and life! - Blessings, Daniel

Melani Udaeta
Date: 2/1/2024 9:47:00 PM

Thank you!