CayCay Godwin Poet Couplet

Impacts of Oneness

Here, our love was first cast in impacts of oneness ~ ~
now mocking meadow grass clasps me, chained to numbness.

Vast tears rip me with shaking-grips of steady spill ~ ~
heartbreak and tears weaken me, beat from their drummed trill.

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Caren Krutsinger March 31, 2019 at 6:12 AM CayCay I have printed this out and intend to read it from time to time, because everyone can use a little more beauty in their life.

Constance La France March 29, 2019 at 11:00 AM CayCay, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned piece ~

Jennifer Proxenos March 28, 2019 at 12:18 AM CayCy dear friend, congratulations on your win in the contest - a great poem, a great poem as always. Wrote to Andrea - soup mail will follow shortly, when I come up for breath. Poetry Hugs, Jenny.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 2:31 PM - A great poem for this writing challenge ... congratulations, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich March 26, 2019 at 1:11 AM deep and emotive one, Caycay. I feel the melancholy. i'm here not even 1/2 caught up and just gotta get to bed. Thanks for lending your ear when i was at my dad's.. you are such a sweetie!