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Impact

Dirt flies into air Steel target on an incline Mocking, teasing, out of reach Standing tall, erect Lead ball erupts, impact sure Bullet whizzes by intact. For all those who have missed the target, once in there life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/5/2009 10:47:00 AM
Sending you another greeting on this one. Mom
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Date: 9/18/2009 3:40:00 PM
Doris, i'm still missing targets, kool piece>>James
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Date: 9/7/2009 6:35:00 AM
Poised beautifully.
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Date: 9/4/2009 5:33:00 PM
Nicely written. We have all missed the target sometimes in our lives. Keep trying and you are bound to hit it. Mom
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