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Immortals

were I to dwell in Van Gogh's hat peer down from walls would I or in meek words that She, the page, immortally on by

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/8/2023 8:22:00 PM

creatively expressed - nicely said

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/9/2023 12:35:00 AM

Thank you for your time Mat

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/8/2023 2:49:00 PM

a superbly flowing piece of work, Clive. I was drawn to your words with the message from immortals. I loved 'She, the page..." It spoke to me. Nicely done, Sara

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/9/2023 12:34:00 AM

Thank you Sara, I'm so pleased it spoke to you, I appreciate your thoughts

Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2023 12:35:00 PM

this is so poetic the way your words flow in such captivating and mellifluous cadence is so beautiful to the soul of a reader. Its like reading an ancient poem the way you’ve phrased your lines: i love van gogh: and i love the line “ that she the page immortally on by” ah impeccable. Love this. fave for me

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 11/8/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thank you for saying such kind words about my poem. On a trip to Amsterdam just before covid we went to the Van Gogh museum and there were many of his self portraits, a random thought of him being immortal looking out at everyone inspired the writing of this poem, when we got home.