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Immortality; the Unopened Gift! (Part 2)

Mind’s serpent illusion, must be brought to a real conclusion, As the serpent’s mind illusion is only a fleshly protrusion No persona of head or mind, can stand the test in time’s line Nor can it ever align, with our love’s faith, within love’s kind As the heart says I am full of love, from above, very fine Generations of strife, has caused a very difficult life For to behold love’s glow, to do so, of the mind very slow Is a heavy blow, to it’s ego, to go, to heart, to start Mind has quaked at it’s mistake, taking a very sacred cake Mind took the cake, having nothing to do, with it’s make or bake The heart’s depart, from the mind’s mistake, was for love’s sake Spinning within, saving itself from the sin, of the mind’s quake All that was left, to do or pursue, the only choice to make The heart left mind’s dilemma, left alone, mind, began to pine Slowly beholds a glow, of heart’s light, realizing it’s plight From heart’s light, receives it sight, previously regarded with spite A light, from within it’s own heart, now mind may see it’s part In time to find itself to be, the servant part, of the heart The whole of love’s self of which it is only a servant part The moral of this story, of course is love’s glory In a mind of hoping, heaven is a closed fallopian Jesus, the present is coping, but has never been opened, By your hoping! Your faith is safe within! But heart has clavis And Love the key, be that you see, a brother to Jesus be Walk the floor of the world no more, love key, open’s heart’s door The kingdom is within you, of life begin ye, anew Life light will brighten, mind enlighten, by golden hue And trouble will all ease, with gracious and sacred new lease, And strife will all cease, with love’s immortality, much peace Love is the source, by Jesus of course, the abundant new lease!! 1-29-10 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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Date: 2/25/2010 2:12:00 PM
Mind boggling...but the heart understands. There is a lot said in these words, Moses. Thanks for sharing. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/12/2010 6:11:00 PM
'The kingdom is within you'...Wow, John, your powerful Christain faith always inspires me - Tim
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Date: 2/10/2010 1:40:00 PM
Another good read. It took me a while to get Jesus. I believed he was a man, now I pray through him to God too. I had to be Jewish to get married the first time. Broke my dad's heart, then I went back to being just Christian after my divorce. My mother understood since Jesus was a Jew too. I've been with my second husband 26 years. First one 9. My three kids celebrate Passover and Christmas. Ellen
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Date: 2/5/2010 11:42:00 AM
Amazing write! Thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece.
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Date: 2/1/2010 3:20:00 PM
Ah, beautifully done ... yes, indeed Jesus is my brother and the PRESENT is living in the NOW ... smile ... thanks for this wonderful write with all its marvelous rhyming !!
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:16:00 PM
Your first verse about the serpent is enormous... I just posted Resilience in the same vain of theme... part 2 has enthralled my senses and soul... LUV is the binding tie... excellent my friend Moses... u did not disappoint with this continuation... amazing.. awesome... intense... immense.. poignant... hope all who read will be blessed.. to the higher level ... as u have taught me... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/31/2010 10:24:00 AM
Many today do not believe a human can live above the mind's domination. This is because of erronious teachings, of well meaning individuals. Who do not know or understand that the gift's power (Love) belongs to the children of God's kingdom. For the flesh of humanity to survive, what is coming, upon the earth, it is very necessary for some to totally open the heart's door.This is heavy, I know, but necessary! (c. Matt. 24:22)( Matt. 25:25 flesh is earth) Sincerely, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/31/2010 9:50:00 AM
God is Love! This Love is the immortality of all of life's inner essence. The human's sacred heart is the storehouse of this immortal Love. Your heart is your jesus, the gift of Love. To continue to live from the mind illusion, is to live apart from your power of immortality. To do this is to leave your gift unopened. To have received Jesus, is to receive the love gift. "That's Good! However, to continue to let your mind dominate you, means you are not living now, in your, power, Immortality!
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Date: 1/30/2010 3:07:00 PM
A way with words to tell us that God is love for love is of God. If we could get that love grounded in us, we would be a different sort. It is not so easy to live it every day in every hour. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to comment on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:46:00 PM
Love is the source,by Jesus Of course,So true, Its all about Jesus and He is all love..The Kingdom is within Us and We can taste Heaven from now, loved this inspiring write John..love your faith..We are blessed to have you here..Charma
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