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Immortality

If I were immortal I’d wish to be An Earth angel who sets those in chains free I’d enter every evil person’s heart Putting a stop to wars before they start. If I were immortal no one would weep I’d spread happiness whilst the broken sleep I accept partings come in silent grief And would affirm that grief is a relief. I would aim to be a blessed precious lamb Bringing joys to the brotherhood of man Or a shepherdess with a magic crook Keeping folk in order with just one look. I’d see that birds were content in a tree Chirping away happily constantly That they’d soar o’er sky of infinite girth Where nothing’s heard between Heaven and Earth. I'd be a singer upon the world's stage Singing songs heard from cradle to the grave Songs of love they'd be and a comfort too To all who'd find me worth listening to. Melodies immortal the same as me Forever in the book named history.

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Date: 6/29/2022 9:29:00 PM
Belle, thanks for visiting me. I got to read you top placement poem. Enjoyed it can see why placed so high. I'm just glad I placed ,LOL. Keep up the good work.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/30/2022 11:46:00 AM
Thank you Barbara, most appreciated… Belle
Date: 6/13/2022 9:43:00 AM
This was lovely and full of imagery. Ann
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 6/30/2022 11:42:00 AM
Thank you Ann, very much… Belle
Date: 5/3/2022 4:41:00 AM
Great and wild and beautiful imagination. Congratulations!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2022 7:08:00 AM
Christuraj, I so appreciate those words of yours, thank you and bless you… Belle
Date: 5/2/2022 7:54:00 AM
Excellent poem, Belle, congratulations:)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2022 7:04:00 AM
That you Jo, I really do appreciate that. Belle :-)
Date: 5/2/2022 7:02:00 AM
WoW! Belle, This is so well written and heartfelt. I echo what Evelyn said. Congratulations on your high placement in the contest. Have a nice:-) Alexis
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2022 7:03:00 AM
Thank you Alexis, I hadn’t seen that the contest had been judged till just now, I’m so thrilled to be up there on the list of winning poetry. Still haven’t got much time to give to the soup as Alan is still in recovery from his serious illness. Bless you, Belle :-)
Date: 4/25/2022 12:33:00 AM
Absolutely loving this. Freedom is what from all absurd shackles we long for. Definitely these beautiful enlightening wishes might be the ultimate goal
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 5/30/2022 6:57:00 AM
Silpika, thank you very much your comments are truly appreciated… Belle
Date: 4/23/2022 10:21:00 PM
This is so beautiful that it had me sighing, Belle. It is a fave for me. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/24/2022 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Evelyn for the fave and best wishes, really appreciated… Belle :)
Date: 4/23/2022 2:45:00 PM
I would love to meet you Belle, You always spread love and good cheer, be blessed always my friend and keep spreading your kindness. Love and hugs, Jennifer.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/23/2022 7:07:00 PM
I would love to meet you too Jennifer, I’m sure it would be a wonderful meeting. Thank you for the kind words, as always they’re very much appreciated… Hugs with love… Belle
Date: 4/19/2022 6:01:00 PM
I love this ! Your intention, your heart and your healing words and thoughts . All the best to you ! Susan :)
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/21/2022 12:50:00 PM
Thank you so much Susan, love your comment. All the best in return to you… Belle :)
Date: 4/19/2022 5:55:00 PM
After reading this, Belle, all I can say is: O, would that you were immortal!! Beautifully written! ~ Gershon
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/21/2022 12:48:00 PM
Ah, thank you Gershon, wishes can come true so maybe… Belle
Date: 4/19/2022 11:33:00 AM
That would certainly keep you busy for eternity! Aloha!
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/21/2022 12:46:00 PM
It certainly would Rico, if only. Thank you… Belle
Date: 4/19/2022 7:52:00 AM
You'd certainly make it a better world Belle, hope things are going well for you both. Greetings from Turkey Tom
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/21/2022 12:44:00 PM
Thank you Tom, I like to think I do my bit, but then I’m only human with human traits. Things are going well, though it’s a slow recovery for Alan. Hope you’re having a lovely time in Turkey… Belle
Date: 4/19/2022 1:05:00 AM
This is one of the best poems I've read on this contest. Best for a win. Hope all is well at home.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/19/2022 4:52:00 AM
Thank you Victor I appreciate that very much. We’ve just got back from hospital, Alan had to go for a blood test, we had a lift and he walked on his frame, things are slowly improving… Belle

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