Immortal Words!

Many immortal words have been spoken in the heat of the moment,
During romantic settings, wars and other distressful foment!
Damsels have said, "I wouldn't be caught dead with that guy!"
Decades later she celebrates their fiftieth with love yet in her eye!

"We caught them napping!" the last words of the arrogant Custer.
Surprise! Surprise! He took on more than he could muster!
From the Titanic's crows nest, "Slow down! There's ice dead ahead!"
Said Captain Smith, "I've schedules to meet!" sailing on instead!

"They couldn't hit an elephant at this distance!", said the general.
They lifted Sedgwick off the ground, already planning his funeral!
Admiral Farragut roared, "Damn the torpedoes! Full speed ahead!"
Easy for him to say, filling his sailors with terrible fear and dread!

"I only regret I have but one life to lose!" said Nathan Hale,
Before he was hustled off to the scaffold sans benefit of bail!
"Lets cross over the river and sit in the shade of the trees."
Said Stonewall Jackson, instantly shot in error, falling to his knees!

Goliath taunted, "Am I a dog that you come at me with sticks?"
David with his sling and stone showed Mr. Goliath a few tricks!
Wives claim husbands have a knack for having the last word:
"I ain't lost! No need to ask for directions!" immortal words often heard!

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/5/2010 1:30:00 PM
Ah, you have me smiling again, Bob. One saying I always found funny was "Damned the torpedoes; full speed ahead." And I got a good laugh from Custer's line as well. You rock! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/5/2010 4:29:00 AM
how could have i missed this one, a very interesting and brilliant write. Did you know i found a little humor in this awesome write of yours Bob, you have your self a nice day, mine has just started,..p.d
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Date: 5/5/2010 12:01:00 AM
Wow, you must have paid attention in school;. This is such a great history lesson. I have been reading your work..just to busy to respond as much as Id like. BTW..congrats on your recent successes in the contest world. BG
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Date: 5/4/2010 8:05:00 PM
great write, enjoyed!
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Date: 5/4/2010 7:40:00 PM
That was a fun read. Full of education and historic references that may be lost on some but that amazed and entertained this reader. Great job.
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