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Immortal Man

Immortal Man I’m the spirit of man, an immortal soul the sum of all people, the total, the whole. I surrendered my life so yours would not end. I believed in the virtues of compassionate men. When I suffered from hunger you had no food to spare. When I begged for some water you had none to share. When I asked for forgiveness you would not forgive yet you ask for my grace each day that you live. You looked at my skin, shackled my feet. You murdered, imprisoned, tried to defeat. You used your religion to wipe out a breed. You stoned and you laughed as you watched humans bleed. When you look at our world look close and you’ll see all I prayed man would never be. Still I’ll go on believing in the morality of mankind. I’m the universal spirit good and evil defined.

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Date: 2/2/2019 2:30:00 AM
When Mother Teresa was at the train station in Darjeeling, India, Jesus appeared to her as a begger asking for a drink of water. 'I Thirst,' he said. Since then, she has given millions to drink. It is her example that I rely on, to have faith that all Good and Divine Work, will continue, in spite of everything! Bravo! To your truthful, soul-searching and heartfelt piece!
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 2/2/2019 10:28:00 AM
Thank you kindly Andrew. Mother Teresa is a good example for all of us. Blessings, Susan
Date: 2/1/2019 6:24:00 AM
When we are in a bind, God will always be kind, Offer support; Not sell short; Gave us peace of mind.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 2/1/2019 10:14:00 AM
Thank you James. Blessings, Susan
Date: 2/1/2019 6:17:00 AM
Your picture reminds me of the tube going into my wife's nose. They said that this is a positive sign of recovery. Wearing your hair like that is a positive sign.
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Date: 1/28/2019 4:47:00 AM
Susan, this went to my FAV list about three times as I was reading it, and finally on my real FAV list after I read it. It appeals to me at all levels of my soul.
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Susan Jeavons
Date: 1/28/2019 11:33:00 AM
I am honored to be on your FAV list Caren! Thank you. Hugs, Susan

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