Immortal Light

Almost, almost, my light went out with yours.
My spirit comatose, could it still live?
Our God was there and touched and found a spark.
He showed me I had yet a bit to give.
Reluctantly, I stirred and took His hand.
He gently lifted me to firmer ground.
With His help now, I seek to find the way
To set you free, your spirit homeward bound.
I longed to keep you here with me, always,
But God had plans that were no part of mine.
Your light was strong enought to linger still,
God's breath has given it immortal shine.

Each night I search the sky for that new star,
He promised He would show me from afar.

Won an 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Seeker Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 10:10 PM
Beautiful! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 9:23 PM
Congratulations on this heartbreaking write!
Blodgett Avatar
October 11, 2020 at 7:59 PM
Very nice! Beautiful!!
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October 11, 2020 at 5:11 PM
Congratulations, Joyce, on the great win for your excellent write!!
Rose  Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 5:11 AM
What a lovely winning poem dear Joyce, congrats on your win xo
Ashley Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 7:53 PM
Your sonnet is so softly tender, intimate and beautifully moving, Joyce. I hope you see your star in the night skies. Congratulations on your excellent win. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:21 PM
Lovely tribute poem, Joyce and a very well deserved win for you from Brian. Congratulations.
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Lovely poem, Joyce. A FAVE for me.
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December 28, 2011 at 10:35 PM
Congrats. Enjoyed your write and win both, my friend. bl
Brown Avatar
December 28, 2011 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations Joyce. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 8:02 PM
Oh,joyce, I hope he shows you that star one night. I love how you made this so personal about your beloved brother. HOpe you had a great Christmas and congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
December 27, 2011 at 3:49 PM
Hard to stay behind..but you are needed here! Congrad's on your win watch those calories over the holidays! Light & Love
Richards Avatar
February 8, 2010 at 8:26 AM
As such love endures....what a beautiful, heart filled sonnet, Joyce! Well done!~ Carrie
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