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Immortal image versus cruel cage

Men were made in God’s immortal image But were lured into serpent’s cruel cage; Christ bought redemption From eternal damnation, For the sinner who wants to be a sage.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 6/27/2010 10:15:00 AM
HI, Adeleke, This was a very nice limerick. I only just now saw your comment you made in my flower blog, where you urged me to write for your contest. If I can find the time, I will do it. I have written a poem about a historical incident in one AFrican nation. Would that be too specific for your contest?Also, I know a lady who did a great African nature poem. i'll contact her about your contest. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 6/24/2010 4:59:00 AM
Great write Andeleke - rgds WN
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Date: 6/23/2010 4:03:00 PM
Really a great write, Adeleke! Wish you all the best for the contest and keep your creative pen flowing!!!...Love, Gert
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Date: 6/23/2010 12:44:00 PM
great job on the limmerick!! I don't think mine came out so well.
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Date: 6/23/2010 10:11:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winner's circle...Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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