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Immortal Hunger

starving for your ache you nourish my core with ease- immortal hunger February 5, 2019

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2019 5:17:00 PM

lovely senryu LuLoo many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2019 7:37:00 PM

great last line! Congrats in the contest, Lu loo

Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2019 7:36:00 AM

thank you lovely lady! :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 2/7/2019 4:11:00 PM

Great Senryu, Laura, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*

Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2019 7:35:00 AM

aww you too! thank you :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/7/2019 12:59:00 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2019 7:35:00 AM

thank you sweet Sunshine! ;)-luloo

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/7/2019 5:07:00 AM

Nice one, made me think of the True Blood series, congratulations on your winning placement!

Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2019 7:35:00 AM

I wanna see that! Thank you so much! :)-luloo

DM Babbit

Date: 2/5/2019 9:39:00 AM

LOve it, we are all filled at some time with that Immortal hunger. Good luck in the contest.

Lu Loo
Date: 2/8/2019 7:34:00 AM

many thanks! :)-luloo