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Immortal Hunger

starving for your ache
      you nourish my core with ease-
                        immortal hunger


February 5, 2019

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Jan Allison

February 8, 2019 at 5:17 PM

lovely senryu LuLoo many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

February 7, 2019 at 7:37 PM

great last line! Congrats in the contest, Lu loo

Beautiful Scars

February 8, 2019 at 7:36 AM

thank you lovely lady! :)-luloo

Eve Roper

February 7, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Great Senryu, Laura, have a Happy Valentine's Day.. Congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*

Beautiful Scars

February 8, 2019 at 7:35 AM

aww you too! thank you :)-luloo

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 7, 2019 at 12:59 PM

- Congratulations on your lovely Valentine Senryu, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beautiful Scars

February 8, 2019 at 7:35 AM

thank you sweet Sunshine! ;)-luloo

Tania Kitchin

February 7, 2019 at 5:07 AM

Nice one, made me think of the True Blood series, congratulations on your winning placement!

Beautiful Scars

February 8, 2019 at 7:35 AM

I wanna see that! Thank you so much! :)-luloo

DM Babbit

February 5, 2019 at 9:39 AM

LOve it, we are all filled at some time with that Immortal hunger. Good luck in the contest.

Beautiful Scars

February 8, 2019 at 7:34 AM

many thanks! :)-luloo

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