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Immerse Under Poetic Waves Within

"The wind is the pounding of my heart" So much detail and so finite beautiful The wind charms even the most dutiful. It's chosen hope and promise fulfillment. Gentle instilling sound at that moment, Silent meditation and absorbed in thought. The world ebullient heart it has brought Prodigious place of grace in poetic pleasure. It brings me close joining in its leisure Immerse under waves within, forgetting Who I am, a glorious thing, and unforgetting. 8/18/2022 Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired - R Form Poetry Contest 3. "The wind is the pounding of my heart." Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/6/2022 11:49:00 PM
Eve, excellent Rhyme poem wonderfully penned and presented and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - Let Your Muse Be Inspired, God Bless ~
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Date: 9/3/2022 4:52:00 AM
Creative way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 8/24/2022 9:16:00 AM
a masterful poem for this contest; it would be a winner in any contest
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Date: 8/20/2022 2:40:00 PM
Great artistic poem, Eve. Enjoy the weekend! Panagiota
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Date: 8/19/2022 5:27:00 PM
Strong metaphoric poetry, Eve. I lik your entry for a high placing. Bill
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