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Immediately Recognized Space Ancestors

Cosmic enthusiasm oozing at covert desert landing strip We, Sedona's most aware, gathered in dream state, Opening our minds in amazed glory. Excitement mounts, as we begin to see our immediately recognized but never before met E.T. ancestors who are returning to claim us as their most assertive by-products. Ethereal night gliders, who have taken eon-years to return. The hidden survivors of Atlantis hit the hidden landing lights Sedona's secret airport returns to her former active state. We, who have been led here in our dreams Welcomed by our extraterrestrial sixth-fathers Determined to take us to our forever home I have never felt so delighted. My heart is racing in excitement!

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Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/11/2019 1:00:00 AM

Oh yes Caren, I am with you all the way on this one, so please be sure to look out for the lady in the hat! Fantastic write Caren with a well deserved gold ribbon! With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/11/2019 2:25:00 AM

Thank you Ann. I had never "tried" science fiction before, but I have always liked reading it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/9/2019 10:59:00 PM

This is fantabulous! You have reached a real science fiction fan. Write on, Caren! ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/10/2019 3:29:00 AM

I wrote this as my first attempt at science fiction, and won a gold ribbon on another poetry site. I guess I can do this!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/9/2019 12:10:00 PM

Great line, 'extraterriestrial sixth fathers' and 'hidden survivors of Atlantis' - though I wonder if they would come in peace?

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/9/2019 12:42:00 PM

If they did not, it is not my poem.