Immanent Yet Transcendent

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Poetry/Sonnet/Immanent yet Transcendent
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1581-746-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 27, 2023
For the International contest, Immanent yet Transcendent
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 10/06/2023

Sixth Place

The Immanence and Transcendence of God | Transcendence is that aspect of God's character that recognizes his position above and beyond all that he created. He is great, impenetrable, and... | By

"You're not strong enough whispered the Devil to withstand life's storms and I yelled back to him, thanks to God I am the storm." Quote by _ Constance I am that which I am within my mind, and able to transcend this earthly realm; have found my true purpose- I am not blind, though the way to I am can overwhelm. I will be- create what I will create, these thoughts are deep-seated within my soul; God has always taught me my sublime fate, it is who I am, it is my life goal. I am who created me, I am me, two little words that can change a whole life; I am who I was yet I am guilt free, free of the strife in life and her sharp knife. I am and I am- boundless and unique; immanent, transcendent, not weak or meek.

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Sotto Poet

Date: 10/6/2023 9:45:00 AM

Your quote, my friend, is like a vivid painting that beautifully captures the depths of your emotions. You possess a rare talent for expressing yourself, making you a true legend in the realm of creativity. Your presence on this platform, like a majestic bird with shattered wings, will forever inspire me. I extend my heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved win.

Constance La France
Date: 10/7/2023 7:44:00 AM

Sotto, thank you so much for the beautiful comment, compliment on my poem and writing and for the congratulations, appreciate.

The Situation

Date: 9/28/2023 6:51:00 PM

Looking for contrversy the I Am gets it. God say tell them that I Am. Yet Jesus said that we are gods. Yes we do play a part in our own creation. We've grown poeticly because that is our goal. So this piece does have relevence.

Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 11:00:00 AM

Situation, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/28/2023 12:37:00 PM

“These thoughts are deep seated within my soul” that line! Not weak or meek! This is a powerful write! And i love your rhymes too here in this sonnet. I am the storm i am the force! How empowering too is this. Soul hitting. Love this one. Goodluck for the contest

Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 11:01:00 AM

Ink, thank you for the great comment, compliment and encouragement.

Jay Narain

Date: 9/28/2023 10:03:00 AM

Nicely penned. Emotional and Transcendental.

Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 11:01:00 AM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment and comment.

Silent One

Date: 9/28/2023 4:45:00 AM

Great quote my friend.. you really know how to portray how you feel... a true legend on the soup.. you will always be broken wings to me...

Constance La France
Date: 9/29/2023 11:03:00 AM

Silent, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, quote and my writing. I loved using Broken Wings too but it came to a time when I needed to write under my own name.