Constance La France Poet Sonnet

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Poetry/Sonnet/Immanent yet Transcendent
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1581-746-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 27, 2023
For the International contest, Immanent yet Transcendent
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 10/06/2023

Sixth Place

Immanent Yet Transcendent

 

"You're not strong enough whispered the Devil to withstand life's
storms and I yelled back to him, thanks to God I am the storm."

                                                     Quote by _ Constance


I am that which I am within my mind,
and able to transcend this earthly realm;
have found my true purpose- I am not blind,
though the way to I am can overwhelm.


I will be-   create what I will create,
these thoughts are deep-seated within my soul;
God has always  taught me my sublime fate,
it is who I am, it is my life goal.

I am who created me, I am me,
two little words that can change a whole life;
I am who I was yet I am guilt free,
free of the strife in life and her sharp knife.

I am and I am-   boundless and unique;
immanent, transcendent, not weak or meek.

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Sotto Poet October 6, 2023 at 9:45 AM Your quote, my friend, is like a vivid painting that beautifully captures the depths of your emotions. You possess a rare talent for expressing yourself, making you a true legend in the realm of creativity. Your presence on this platform, like a majestic bird with shattered wings, will forever inspire me. I extend my heartfelt congratulations to you for your well-deserved win. Constance La France October 7, 2023 at 7:44 AM Sotto, thank you so much for the beautiful comment, compliment on my poem and writing and for the congratulations, appreciate.

The Situation September 28, 2023 at 6:51 PM Looking for contrversy the I Am gets it. God say tell them that I Am. Yet Jesus said that we are gods. Yes we do play a part in our own creation. We've grown poeticly because that is our goal. So this piece does have relevence. Constance La France September 29, 2023 at 11:00 AM Situation, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate.

Ink Empress September 28, 2023 at 12:37 PM “These thoughts are deep seated within my soul” that line! Not weak or meek! This is a powerful write! And i love your rhymes too here in this sonnet. I am the storm i am the force! How empowering too is this. Soul hitting. Love this one. Goodluck for the contest Constance La France September 29, 2023 at 11:01 AM Ink, thank you for the great comment, compliment and encouragement.

Silent One September 28, 2023 at 4:45 AM Great quote my friend.. you really know how to portray how you feel... a true legend on the soup.. you will always be broken wings to me... Constance La France September 29, 2023 at 11:03 AM Silent, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, quote and my writing. I loved using Broken Wings too but it came to a time when I needed to write under my own name.