Imitation

Accents blending in the air.  Southern drawl slowly mixing with Caribbean beats,,
Until the energy of the Harlem Renaissance tops it all off.
"We don't like you." Says the wind to the teenage girl.
"You have to much mixture,to much blend.  You don't fit into any boxes."
                    says the rain drop.
"Change, cut two mixtures or else." threatens the lightning.

But to cut even one would leave her vulnerable to all elements.  She needed
her full foundation.  
"We don't like you." says the wind again.
"I don't care." says the girl.
"You will." roared the thunder.
The blend bubbled inside of her but didn't boil over.  It went to slow simmer.
She smiled in calmness not anger.
"At least you dislike me, not a cheap imitation of someone else." says the girl.

Then the sun stood up.

"Leave her alone.  She is my real gem." says the sun.

The sun brightened the sky above her head.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
September 17, 2018 at 9:00 PM
Lovely strong message, Dietra. Congrats on your gold medal win.
Reid Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 9:03 AM
I appreciate your kind words. Thank you.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 11, 2018 at 2:47 PM
Unique and splendid! I adored this Dietra! Congratulations on your deserving win! : )
Reid Avatar
September 18, 2018 at 9:02 AM
Thank you so much.
Carber Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Congrats on your 1st place, Dietra!
Reid Avatar
September 10, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thank you
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