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Her mind is afar somewhere ...imagining She's flying with her dragon He's flying her away to a magical place Where rainbows never fades and flowers are forever blooming They dance and laugh Twirling in sugar land But never eye to eye She's afraid to look into his eyes Because his eyes have fire burning ...and She's not ready to burn just yet... She needs to be able to keep coming back She's treasuring every moment spend It's where she finds joy and peace Until she's gravitating back to her shell and all is back to grey Only her mind keeps her busy ...imagining! Smile Akkina R Downing 8-16-17

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Paul Callus

Date: 3/18/2018 2:05:00 PM

Hitching a ride to fantasyland is something which many of us often do, Akkina, but your imagination has something different and special about it! Don't let fear keep you back from enjoying your rides!! ~ Smiles & Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/31/2017 8:39:00 PM

Oh my whimsical Akkina! Like I said; I love the way your mind works! What a delicious, magical and romantic poem you created so artistically and beautifully. A wild fantasy ride so amazing! Love it and so enjoyed reading it this evening :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/1/2017 8:44:00 PM

Lol! I love your cute sense of humor my dear Akkina.., hugs and smiles to you too :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 9/1/2017 9:30:00 AM

Oh it's amazing until you come back to reality. Lol! Thank you so much my dearest and lovely friend... hugs and smiles :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2017 5:52:00 PM

this is quite profound, Akkina. Love this IMAGINING. I think you are she!!

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/22/2017 7:20:00 PM

Awe, thank you so much Andrea :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/20/2017 11:04:00 AM

You have a good imagination. I have enjoyed this poem. have a god day my friend.

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/22/2017 6:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Darlen. I'm super happy you enjoyed it :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 8/17/2017 2:47:00 PM

Alright, Khaleesi Akkina! Riding on a dragon are you ... lol. This is such a dreamy poem, any shy romantic can relate to this sweet write. Pure poetry. Love and joy always.

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/17/2017 3:29:00 PM

If only.. Lol! Khaleesi is a beautiful name. Thank you my dear friend Freddie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/17/2017 2:41:00 PM

- Fantasy is the ability to imagine something, especially what's not in reality and this is a beautiful picture of your imagination Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/17/2017 3:26:00 PM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise! Always appreciate your visit and comment :) hugs :)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/17/2017 12:34:00 PM

Hi Kina: A beautiful imaginative poem riding on a dragon! My compliments! (small suggestion-where rainbows never FADE.)

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/17/2017 2:21:00 PM

Thanks for pointing it out Ralph I appreciate :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 8/17/2017 11:01:00 AM

Hello Kina,I just love this poem a true flight of fantasy. I could see you riding on your dragon a smile as big as the sky on your face. And the line; where rainbows never fade and flowers are forever Blooming is just magical such an enjoyable read thank you for sharing it. Have a blessed day my talented soup friend.

Akkina Downing
Date: 8/17/2017 11:30:00 AM

It's a wonderful feeling for sure. And wouldn't it be so fabulous to have it come true. Lol! Thank you so much my good friend Ed!