Imagined You

Did I just imagine you or are you just a dream maybe just a figment of my brains insanity do I dare to question whether you are really real? maybe I should tell someone how lost I really feel do you know how lonely it is inside my brain? there is no one to share this deep embodied pain I tried to do everything to show you how deeply I feel but you never bought that this was ever the real deal I don't know what to say to you, have no way to explain the disappointment that I felt when it just washed away remember the day you confirmed you had lied to me didn't you understand that betrayal cut way deep time and time I asked you and you thought I had no clue I was not the clueless one your deception I saw through so I sit here all alone not knowing what to say wanting to reassure you that everything is okay maybe the relationship was only in my brain maybe there is no you, that you are a figment I create doesn't matter anyway, I'll love you all the same
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 1, 2017 at 5:18 AM
you have a nice rhyming style and interesting topics and views i enjoy reading your work i'd like to see you write something that is not a rhyming structure and maybe a 'stream of consciousness' style.. just an off topic..have you ever heard townes van zandt..?.. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lEG0rOyS0rU
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April 27, 2020 at 10:28 AM
Thank you I figured out how to reply on the comments finally. Have you read my short stories or my poem Perception? It may fit the "stream of consciousness" bill so to speak.
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