Imagine That

The sky full of ashes, the air packed with dust
All cars are abandoned and covered in rust

A city, deserted, lifeless, and cold
A story of war, these ruins have told

There are some survivors, but only a few
Lurking in shadows, they’re hiding from you

You look like a monster, you’re covered in dirt
You’ve a knife in your hand, and blood on your shirt

You’ve spotted a child, he cowers in fear
Eyes widen in horror, he bolts like a deer 	

The memory of battle, still fresh in your mind
Prevents the peace you are trying to find

Tears run down your face, you’re starting to cry
Despair takes over, you wish you could die

You’re suddenly blinded by a heavenly light
You close your eyes, it’s unbearably bright

Your heart seems to lighten, you feel the relief
As your fears are all stolen by a mysterious thief

The light filled with kindness then fades away
And you know you've survived another day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Look up my poem "ashes" I think you might enjoy it.
Farley Avatar
February 17, 2015 at 9:00 AM
I looked it up. It is awesome.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 14, 2015 at 9:19 AM
This is an exceptional first offering to the soup. You will fit in nicely, welcome to the soup.
Farley Avatar
January 15, 2015 at 9:58 AM
Thank you.
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November 13, 2014 at 3:19 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Samantha - I choose your first very well written poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Farley Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 12:59 PM
Thanks.
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