Donna Jones Poet Free verse

Imagine

If we could.....

Taste the beauty of butterfly wings
   and buttercups blooming..

Smell a hot orange sun setting
   and fluffy white clouds floating..

See what raindrops see falling
    and the perfume inside a rose..

Hear the calmness of a clear blue sky
    and the power of a snow peaked mountain..

Touch the velvety blackness of midnight
    and a mighty lightning bolt..

Imagine..what a different world this would be.......

©Donna Jones

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Richard Lamoureux April 12, 2014 at 1:55 PM I so enjoyed rereading this one.

Poet Destroyer A January 10, 2014 at 4:20 PM Donna, you are a blessing and family to many of us here... .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Sukmawati Komala June 2, 2013 at 3:55 AM so beautifully written <3 enjoyed so very much dearest sweet Donna <3 <3 <3

Bl Devnath May 16, 2013 at 10:20 PM Wonderful poem of hidden beauty enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Thanks....,loved always, bl Donna Jones May 17, 2013 at 6:40 PM Thank you..

Debbie Guzzi May 11, 2013 at 6:54 PM I am humbled by the sincerity and simplicity of your verse. Thanks so much for the entry. Light & Love Donna Jones May 11, 2013 at 7:31 PM Thanks for sponsoring us and for the honor Debbie :-)

Carrie Richards May 11, 2013 at 9:40 AM Yes.........if only we could imagine only beautiful things......perhaps we would take better care of what is so precious! This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations to you Donna! Donna Jones May 11, 2013 at 7:31 PM Thanks Carrie.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 11, 2013 at 7:55 AM Congrats, dear, on the placement with this cute lil write!!Jag Donna Jones May 11, 2013 at 7:32 PM Thanks a lot Jag....

Therese Bacha May 10, 2013 at 8:28 PM Congrats on your win Donna. Very different kind of poem, i liked it. Love Terry xoxo Donna Jones May 10, 2013 at 9:39 PM Thanks so much terry...:-)

Joseph May May 10, 2013 at 8:07 PM congrats on a great win Donna Donna Jones May 10, 2013 at 9:41 PM Your support flies me to the outer limits..ha! Thanks..

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 8, 2013 at 11:34 AM Cute write... Best wishes friend ~A.O Donna Jones May 9, 2013 at 5:17 PM Thanks AO..:-)

Sasha Maharaj May 7, 2013 at 8:08 AM Serenity Indeed ;) Love the poem Donna :) Donna Jones May 9, 2013 at 5:20 PM Thanks Sasha...serenity....nice word...

Opondi Ougo May 7, 2013 at 4:58 AM Beautiful poetry..i soo love the word paint.Awesome write :-) Donna Jones May 9, 2013 at 5:21 PM Thank you so much....love your avatar....looks like an interesting story....

Richard Lamoureux May 6, 2013 at 6:57 PM Nothing wrong with dreaming Donna! Have a good night. Donna Jones May 9, 2013 at 5:23 PM Well thank goodness...cause sometimes that's all we have..thanks Richard..

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2013 at 2:32 PM this one is really pretty. I like it a lot! Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:21 PM Hello Andrea...nice to see ya...thanks...

Nette Onclaud May 6, 2013 at 9:47 AM reading this again through more fascinated eye... got more?.. :) huggs! Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:22 PM Hi nette. Thanks...yes...working on a new one....in between mowing....and fishing..

Connie Gildersleeve May 6, 2013 at 8:36 AM Scrumptious Donna. Sensory written in every way. Yes the world would be more beautiful, especially in a poetically sense. It sounds like a winner. Best wishes, Connie Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:20 PM Thank you Connie....

Painted Hunter May 6, 2013 at 7:15 AM Donna, I love this...faving it! Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:20 PM Thanks......so much... Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:19 PM Caleb...you made my day....all of yours are my favs ...I have all my friends here listed as favorites....:-)

Sukmawati Komala May 5, 2013 at 10:45 PM awww so lovely just too sweet my dearest sista Donna... enjoyed so much reading your fabulous penned this morn :) much luv and hugs <3 Sk Donna Jones May 6, 2013 at 4:17 PM Thanks soooooo much...

Jack Horne May 5, 2013 at 3:04 PM aa sure win here. congrats on your wins : ) Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 8:14 PM Thank you Jack...

Richard Lamoureux May 5, 2013 at 7:36 AM Good morning Donna. Enjoyed reading this one again. Still love it. The title makes me Think of John Lennon. Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 8:18 PM Yeah...guess growing up listening to this music made me a dreamer!

Nette Onclaud May 5, 2013 at 6:05 AM You are in your element!... i see this well-scribed piece in the winners'list... dazzling, donna!..:) huggs Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 8:19 PM So very sweet, thanks nette.

Timothy Hicks May 4, 2013 at 11:40 PM It seems as though, even at our peak, we can't fully experience the world around us. Perhaps someday! You did an excellent job at capturing all five sense... it's fun to imagine and good for the soul :) Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 8:21 PM Aahhhh. Thanks Timothy...yes be a kid again once in a while...

Ravi Sathasivam May 4, 2013 at 10:32 PM Excellent. Very deeply said. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Donna Jones May 5, 2013 at 8:21 PM :-) thank you...

Richard Lamoureux May 4, 2013 at 2:54 PM This is great! A very unique perspective you have presented. I think I can smell a win! Donna Jones May 4, 2013 at 4:11 PM Very nice of you Richard ..don't think I really quite got the contest theme correct but it was fun to write....

Ndaba Sibanda May 4, 2013 at 2:39 PM If we could appreciate wonderful poems like this one, what a wonderful world this would be. Great work of art. It is right to write... Donna Jones May 4, 2013 at 4:12 PM Oh....thank you very much......:-)

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