Imagine

If we could..... Taste the beauty of butterfly wings and buttercups blooming.. Smell a hot orange sun setting and fluffy white clouds floating.. See what raindrops see falling and the perfume inside a rose.. Hear the calmness of a clear blue sky and the power of a snow peaked mountain.. Touch the velvety blackness of midnight and a mighty lightning bolt.. Imagine..what a different world this would be....... ©Donna Jones

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2014 1:55:00 PM

I so enjoyed rereading this one.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2014 4:20:00 PM

Donna, you are a blessing and family to many of us here... .. I posted a new poem would you like to take a trip and read my poem..... You will find your name on my latest... hehehehHeheheh, WARNNING!!! It is a long poem... :) :) LINDA

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 6/2/2013 3:55:00 AM

so beautifully written <3 enjoyed so very much dearest sweet Donna <3 <3 <3

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/16/2013 10:20:00 PM

Wonderful poem of hidden beauty enjoyed a lot. Good luck in the contest. Thanks....,loved always, bl

Donna Jones
Date: 5/17/2013 6:40:00 PM

Thank you..

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/11/2013 6:54:00 PM

I am humbled by the sincerity and simplicity of your verse. Thanks so much for the entry. Light & Love

Donna Jones
Date: 5/11/2013 7:31:00 PM

Thanks for sponsoring us and for the honor Debbie :-)

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/11/2013 9:40:00 AM

Yes.........if only we could imagine only beautiful things......perhaps we would take better care of what is so precious! This is a beautiful poem! Congratulations to you Donna!

Donna Jones
Date: 5/11/2013 7:31:00 PM

Thanks Carrie.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/11/2013 7:55:00 AM

Congrats, dear, on the placement with this cute lil write!!Jag

Donna Jones
Date: 5/11/2013 7:32:00 PM

Thanks a lot Jag....

Therese Bacha

Date: 5/10/2013 8:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win Donna. Very different kind of poem, i liked it. Love Terry xoxo

Donna Jones
Date: 5/10/2013 9:39:00 PM

Thanks so much terry...:-)

Joseph May

Date: 5/10/2013 8:07:00 PM

congrats on a great win Donna

Donna Jones
Date: 5/10/2013 9:41:00 PM

Your support flies me to the outer limits..ha! Thanks..

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/8/2013 11:34:00 AM

Cute write... Best wishes friend ~A.O

Donna Jones
Date: 5/9/2013 5:17:00 PM

Thanks AO..:-)

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/7/2013 8:08:00 AM

Serenity Indeed ;) Love the poem Donna :)

Donna Jones
Date: 5/9/2013 5:20:00 PM

Thanks Sasha...serenity....nice word...

Opondi Ougo

Date: 5/7/2013 4:58:00 AM

Beautiful poetry..i soo love the word paint.Awesome write :-)

Donna Jones
Date: 5/9/2013 5:21:00 PM

Thank you so much....love your avatar....looks like an interesting story....

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/6/2013 6:57:00 PM

Nothing wrong with dreaming Donna! Have a good night.

Donna Jones
Date: 5/9/2013 5:23:00 PM

Well thank goodness...cause sometimes that's all we have..thanks Richard..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2013 2:32:00 PM

this one is really pretty. I like it a lot!

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:21:00 PM

Hello Andrea...nice to see ya...thanks...

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2013 9:47:00 AM

reading this again through more fascinated eye... got more?.. :) huggs!

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:22:00 PM

Hi nette. Thanks...yes...working on a new one....in between mowing....and fishing..

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 5/6/2013 8:36:00 AM

Scrumptious Donna. Sensory written in every way. Yes the world would be more beautiful, especially in a poetically sense. It sounds like a winner. Best wishes, Connie

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:20:00 PM

Thank you Connie....

Painted Hunter

Date: 5/6/2013 7:15:00 AM

Donna, I love this...faving it!

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:20:00 PM

Thanks......so much...

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:19:00 PM

Caleb...you made my day....all of yours are my favs ...I have all my friends here listed as favorites....:-)

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 5/5/2013 10:45:00 PM

awww so lovely just too sweet my dearest sista Donna... enjoyed so much reading your fabulous penned this morn :) much luv and hugs <3 Sk

Donna Jones
Date: 5/6/2013 4:17:00 PM

Thanks soooooo much...

Jack Horne

Date: 5/5/2013 3:04:00 PM

aa sure win here. congrats on your wins : )

Donna Jones
Date: 5/5/2013 8:14:00 PM

Thank you Jack...

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/5/2013 7:36:00 AM

Good morning Donna. Enjoyed reading this one again. Still love it. The title makes me Think of John Lennon.

Donna Jones
Date: 5/5/2013 8:18:00 PM

Yeah...guess growing up listening to this music made me a dreamer!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/5/2013 6:05:00 AM

You are in your element!... i see this well-scribed piece in the winners'list... dazzling, donna!..:) huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 5/5/2013 8:19:00 PM

So very sweet, thanks nette.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/4/2013 11:40:00 PM

It seems as though, even at our peak, we can't fully experience the world around us. Perhaps someday! You did an excellent job at capturing all five sense... it's fun to imagine and good for the soul :)

Donna Jones
Date: 5/5/2013 8:21:00 PM

Aahhhh. Thanks Timothy...yes be a kid again once in a while...