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Imagine

"Imagine your friends getting closer to your imagination," by Poet

Dawning ...
thinking sleepers,
entries processing norm,
advent instants absorbed purpose,
visions.

Drawing ...
mental pictures,
banquets divine eyefuls,
humankind imagines its goals,
blueprints.

Devise ...
managed control,
targets fastest shortcuts,
proven values access success,
brainstorms.

Dreamer ...
taking pleasure,
building airy castles,
lighted tunnels edging extremes,
awakes.

Copyright © Hilo Poet | Year Posted 2023

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Anisha Dutta Date: 10/23/2023 6:40:00 AM An interesting pattern obeying cinquian form. I am charmed. Congratulations and Blessings. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/23/2023 2:18:00 PM It was a challenge, Anisha, and thank you always! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/21/2023 3:43:00 PM congrats with your win here. I did not realize the cinquain pattern you mentioned here. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/21/2023 4:07:00 PM Hi, Andrea! You had caught me, and my aide, in mid-posting. Anyway, I am grateful for your consideration and for noticing my cinquain via PS traditional format, my friend. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2023 10:01:00 AM - A lovely poem, Hilo :) - Many congratulations on your win :) - hugs Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/19/2023 5:22:00 PM Hallo, Anne-Lise! A Hawaiian shout-out to my Nordic friend! A dizzying cliff drive overlooking fjords can't compete with your kind thoughts, my friend! Aloha from Hawaii, William

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/19/2023 4:12:00 AM Congratulations! Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/19/2023 5:03:00 PM Aloha, Kim! Your shout-out makes a smile real, my friend! Mahalo, William

Constance La France Date: 10/18/2023 10:50:00 AM Hilo, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the music and quote, well done, Constance Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/19/2023 4:57:00 PM Aloha, Constance! I am happy with your drawn assessments, my friend! Mahalo with a smile, William

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/18/2023 9:22:00 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Imagine" is a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away........... Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/19/2023 4:06:00 PM Paula, your considerations gave 'blessings' its meaning, and now I am glad, my friend! Aloha, William

Silent One Date: 10/17/2023 1:09:00 PM You did thes so well and your choice of words due to the restrictive nature of this form, are very good.. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/19/2023 3:58:00 PM I stand in the glow of your light, Silent One! Your words now cast a light where a shadow once existed. Aloha, my friend, William

Karen Croft Date: 10/15/2023 2:40:00 AM Interesting thought. I can't imagine my friends in "my little world" Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 10/15/2023 3:14:00 AM A line from 'Don Corleone' re " ... enemies closer." Aloha, Karen, for sharing your thoughts, and for your visit! Mahalo, William