William Kelii Kekaula Poet Cinquain

Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Cinquain

Inspired: 2023 October 12

 

*1st Place*
Imagine, Interlude, Ivory Words
Contest Judged: 2023 October 18
Sponsored by: Constance La France

 

PS Traditional Format
Lines/Syllables/Word Count
1 / 2 / 1
2 / 4 / 2
3 / 6 / 3
4 / 8 / 4
5 / 2 / 1

Video: Beethoven, Ludwig Van - Piano Concerto No. 5 [Emperor Concerto], In E-Flat Major, Op. 73, 2nd Mvt., Adagio Un Poco Mosso by the London Festival Orchestra ft. pianist Sylvia Capova

Imagine

"Imagine your friends getting closer to your imagination," by Poet

Dawning ...
thinking sleepers,
entries processing norm,
advent instants absorbed purpose,
visions.

Drawing ...
mental pictures,
banquets divine eyefuls,
humankind imagines its goals,
blueprints.

Devise ...
managed control,
targets fastest shortcuts,
proven values access success,
brainstorms.

Dreamer ...
taking pleasure,
building airy castles,
lighted tunnels edging extremes,
awakes.

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Anisha Dutta October 23, 2023 at 6:40 AM An interesting pattern obeying cinquian form. I am charmed. Congratulations and Blessings. William Kelii Kekaula October 23, 2023 at 2:18 PM It was a challenge, Anisha, and thank you always! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2023 at 3:43 PM congrats with your win here. I did not realize the cinquain pattern you mentioned here. William Kelii Kekaula October 21, 2023 at 4:07 PM Hi, Andrea! You had caught me, and my aide, in mid-posting. Anyway, I am grateful for your consideration and for noticing my cinquain via PS traditional format, my friend. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2023 at 10:01 AM - A lovely poem, Hilo :) - Many congratulations on your win :) - hugs William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2023 at 5:22 PM Hallo, Anne-Lise! A Hawaiian shout-out to my Nordic friend! A dizzying cliff drive overlooking fjords can't compete with your kind thoughts, my friend! Aloha from Hawaii, William

Kim Rodrigues October 19, 2023 at 4:12 AM Congratulations! William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2023 at 5:03 PM Aloha, Kim! Your shout-out makes a smile real, my friend! Mahalo, William

Constance La France October 18, 2023 at 10:50 AM Hilo, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the music and quote, well done, Constance William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2023 at 4:57 PM Aloha, Constance! I am happy with your drawn assessments, my friend! Mahalo with a smile, William

Paula Goldsmith October 18, 2023 at 9:22 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "Imagine" is a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away........... William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2023 at 4:06 PM Paula, your considerations gave 'blessings' its meaning, and now I am glad, my friend! Aloha, William

Silent One October 17, 2023 at 1:09 PM You did thes so well and your choice of words due to the restrictive nature of this form, are very good.. William Kelii Kekaula October 19, 2023 at 3:58 PM I stand in the glow of your light, Silent One! Your words now cast a light where a shadow once existed. Aloha, my friend, William

Karen Croft October 15, 2023 at 2:40 AM Interesting thought. I can't imagine my friends in "my little world" William Kelii Kekaula October 15, 2023 at 3:14 AM A line from 'Don Corleone' re " ... enemies closer." Aloha, Karen, for sharing your thoughts, and for your visit! Mahalo, William