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Poetic Form: Cinquain

Inspired: 2023 October 12

*1st Place*
Imagine, Interlude, Ivory Words
Contest Judged: 2023 October 18
Sponsored by: Constance La France

PS Traditional Format
Lines/Syllables/Word Count
1 / 2 / 1
2 / 4 / 2
3 / 6 / 3
4 / 8 / 4
5 / 2 / 1

Video: Beethoven, Ludwig Van - Piano Concerto No. 5 [Emperor Concerto], In E-Flat Major, Op. 73, 2nd Mvt., Adagio Un Poco Mosso by the London Festival Orchestra ft. pianist Sylvia Capova

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

"Imagine your friends getting closer to your imagination," by Poet Dawning ... thinking sleepers, entries processing norm, advent instants absorbed purpose, visions. Drawing ... mental pictures, banquets divine eyefuls, humankind imagines its goals, blueprints. Devise ... managed control, targets fastest shortcuts, proven values access success, brainstorms. Dreamer ... taking pleasure, building airy castles, lighted tunnels edging extremes, awakes.

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/23/2023 6:40:00 AM

An interesting pattern obeying cinquian form. I am charmed. Congratulations and Blessings.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/23/2023 2:18:00 PM

It was a challenge, Anisha, and thank you always! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/21/2023 3:43:00 PM

congrats with your win here. I did not realize the cinquain pattern you mentioned here.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/21/2023 4:07:00 PM

Hi, Andrea! You had caught me, and my aide, in mid-posting. Anyway, I am grateful for your consideration and for noticing my cinquain via PS traditional format, my friend. Aloha, William

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2023 10:01:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Hilo :) - Many congratulations on your win :) - hugs

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 5:22:00 PM

Hallo, Anne-Lise! A Hawaiian shout-out to my Nordic friend! A dizzying cliff drive overlooking fjords can't compete with your kind thoughts, my friend! Aloha from Hawaii, William

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 4:12:00 AM

Congratulations!

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 5:03:00 PM

Aloha, Kim! Your shout-out makes a smile real, my friend! Mahalo, William

Constance La France

Date: 10/18/2023 10:50:00 AM

Hilo, beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the music and quote, well done, Constance

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 4:57:00 PM

Aloha, Constance! I am happy with your drawn assessments, my friend! Mahalo with a smile, William

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/18/2023 9:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Imagine" is a creative write. I enjoyed reading this one. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 4:06:00 PM

Paula, your considerations gave 'blessings' its meaning, and now I am glad, my friend! Aloha, William

Silent One

Date: 10/17/2023 1:09:00 PM

You did thes so well and your choice of words due to the restrictive nature of this form, are very good..

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/19/2023 3:58:00 PM

I stand in the glow of your light, Silent One! Your words now cast a light where a shadow once existed. Aloha, my friend, William

Karen Croft

Date: 10/15/2023 2:40:00 AM

Interesting thought. I can't imagine my friends in "my little world"

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/15/2023 3:14:00 AM

A line from 'Don Corleone' re " ... enemies closer." Aloha, Karen, for sharing your thoughts, and for your visit! Mahalo, William