Imagine

Try to imagine, I wonder if you can Abandoning your children because of some ink from a pen.

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David Kavanagh

Date: 8/20/2023 1:40:00 AM

Such is the human condition Mark, how often does this happen in the real brainwashed world, doesn’t even need to be imagined, because it’s rife, thanks for spelling it out, cheers David

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/20/2023 7:15:00 AM

I just can’t wrap my head around it. It’s good to see you David!!

Aurore Severo

Date: 8/20/2023 1:05:00 AM

I could never ever think of us, you make us think, nice poem.

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/20/2023 7:13:00 AM

Thank you Aurore!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/19/2023 8:17:00 PM

Very profound write, evil and ignorance are both bad, when combined, a nightmare for all those around!

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/20/2023 7:12:00 AM

Indeed, good to see you my friend! Thank you!

Jim Slaughter

Date: 8/19/2023 10:29:00 AM

I have never had children of my own, Mark, but I cannot imagine how someone who has them could ever do what your piece suggests.

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/19/2023 7:23:00 PM

It is a shame how so many kids in this world get left behind by their parents. It makes me ill.

Lin Lane

Date: 8/19/2023 8:32:00 AM

I just wrote on David's Abandoned poem that there's a plethora of it going on today. I think I'll stick to writing about something angelic in its stead. I'm hopeful that your pen will be put to more use here now.

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/19/2023 7:26:00 PM

Thanks Lin, I hear so many horror stories you just can’t imagine. Then to do it because of some book written by man makes no sense to me.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/19/2023 6:44:00 AM

A thought provoking piece Mark, So glad to see you being more active on the site, I have missed you so much but fully understand why you haven't been around . hugs jan xx

Mark Koplin
Date: 8/19/2023 7:26:00 PM

Thank you my friend!