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Imagine

Imagine a black velvet curtain
Pinholed to allow specked light
Now imagine that same curtain
Endlessly stretching out of sight
And there you have the immense
Velvet blackness of outer space
In which I hang and float seeing
That speckled velvet any way I face

I suppose I am that lucky man
To know the exact second he will die
No single second longer possible
No matter how or what I try
For the oxygen of life is finite
In my cocooned fragile suit of death
I can rest here calm and unmoving
And so harvest every single breath

Or I can thresh and move and panic
Burn up my allowance fast
Never quite sure which breath
May be the next to last
I am speaking my thoughts slowly
There is so much I want to say
And I hope oh how I hope
I will be found some day

And maybe then just maybe 
Some descendant may know 
How much I loved life
And how I loved her so
I am that one lucky man 
Of our ship crew of five
The only one still here 
The only one still alive

Routine maintenance inspection
Left me suited spaceside and in luck
The only one to survive the hit
When that unknown object struck
My thoughts are now recorded
I am reconciled and at peace
I shall open this seam soon to cold cold space
And so choose my own moment of release

Cruel fate is perhaps 
Really a considerate friend
Allowing me the means 
To make my own end
In that  black velvet curtain
Pinholed to allow specked light
That same black velvet curtain
Endlessly stretching out of sight

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Date: 11/26/2022 2:24:00 PM
wow! i really can't imagine how i'd feel in that scenario, terry, but i love the way you'd handle it (or your fictional version of yourself)...
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Terry Ireland
Date: 11/28/2022 1:11:00 AM
Thanks ilene - must admit this was inspired by the film 2001 A Space Odyssey

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