Imagine

If there were no words to whisper across your skin, these eyes would trace every dark shadow and curve and my breath would linger over your fantasy - as lips draw lines anywhere you wanted - because I could show you love, without sentences touching each other forming very long paragraphs, close your eyes and just imagine ~ When Evening Falls ~ A Pyramid Poem- 10-1

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/19/2021 8:26:00 AM

Like many of your other poems, you appeal to fantasy and imagination, Brandy, and you certainly do not fail to get the intended results. ~ Warm regards & hugs // paul

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/19/2021 12:21:00 PM

Paul, your kind words and compliments always bring a smile to my heart. Thank you doesn't seem enough. I appreciate you and your thoughts more than words can express. Many wonderful blessings to you with soft hugs. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 8/31/2018 1:21:00 PM

Your words are magical and beautiful as always.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/31/2018 1:39:00 PM

Such a sweet thing to say. Thank you June. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/27/2018 10:00:00 PM

Your poem softly sizzles with luscious sensuality, Brandy. Breathtaking poetry that does indeed let the imagination melt seductively.. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 10:37:00 PM

Dear Susan, your thoughts mean so much. Sometimes, my imagination likes to linger. It is wonderful when words touch in this way. :) Playfully. I appreciate you and your kindness. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/27/2018 3:12:00 PM

This reminds me of when I was young and an old man told me that if I could write the alphabet with the tip of my tongue that there would be some happy ladies. I enjoyed reading your new pieces very much...TAH

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 4:21:00 PM

Such a playful thought indeed. :) Lips lingering is very exciting. Thank you Tobey. Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 8/27/2018 11:05:00 AM

Makes me want to get one of those word tattoos...just in case

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 12:02:00 PM

Hmm, a word tattoo? Is that so? :) I am smiling and giggling at your thoughts. Thank you Tim. ~ Brandy

Chris Green

Date: 8/27/2018 11:03:00 AM

Even if we lacked imagination your wonderful poem would be a lesson in exactly how to master the craft. Beautifully delivered and once again, your ability to write with such a soft touch while adding the right amount of warmth is amazing.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 12:00:00 PM

Oh my! Thank you Chris. There is something amazing and wonderful about words touching in this way. Thoughts lingering- letting the imagination play. So to speak. :) I appreciate your comment. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 8/27/2018 4:59:00 AM

Your words form a very sensual image, a beautiful way to start my day. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/27/2018 10:06:00 AM

Thank you John. Yes, this is a playful and sensual poem. It is fun to imagine. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/26/2018 10:37:00 PM

Lovely poem, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 8/26/2018 10:47:00 PM

:) Thank you Line. I enjoyed creating this. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy