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Written, June 23, 2022
(Revision of a former poem
Posted January 30, 2016

1st Place - Tall Tales 3, Sponsor, Jeff Kyser, 07/05/2022

Entered into Contest, "Imagination" 
January 14, 2024
Sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Imagination

I turned into a Unicorn-
   so silky-white, with wings and horn,
to prance and dance on clouds up there
   and spend my days surveying air-
to watch how twinkling stars are born.

I stopped to visit clouds of rain-
   those darker ones that are a pain,
as they release their water flow
   on earthly beings down below
who pray for sunny skies in vane.

But soon, I saw a fluffy one-
   the kind that always blocks the sun
and found it best to take a snooze.
   While in the breeze- I took a cruise
upon a cloud so softly spun.

At night, I flew up near the moon-
   saw how the tides are kept in tune.
Come morn, I pranced toward the sun
   to see how the new dawn is done-
then leads me on to bright high noon.

When day turns dark, stardust I find-
   the finest and most brilliant kind,
to sprinkle on my wings so white.
   Stored there, I shake the starry light
on those below, named Humankind.

And after that, I fly up far
   to find the place where blessings are.
I seek the ones of dearest worth,
   and shower them upon the Earth;
shared gifts from me- peace Avatar.
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Date: 7/7/2022 4:54:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 7/5/2022 12:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. Have a great/blessed day................
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Date: 7/5/2022 8:48:00 AM
Sandra, that is such a lovely poem! So many beautiful lines ~ upon a cloud so softly spun ~ shared gifts from me- Peace Avatar. I'm faving this! Congratulations on First Place :)
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Date: 7/5/2022 5:51:00 AM
This is so beautiful! Congratulations on your top win my dear friend, Sandra! Thanks for sharing! Hugs
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Date: 7/5/2022 4:20:00 AM
Congrats on your first place entry in Tall Tales 3 - it was a lovely fantasy read!
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