Imagery

Awakening to find my room bathed in deepest warmest vermilion Celebrating her rising the sky aglow in vivid magenta and crimson Daily a different artist rejoices painting the sky with joy and elation Delighting in her coming ~ her rising ~ her warmth Like the beat of a drum reaching to a crescendo As that big orange ball truly lights up my soul Written 22nd May 2021 Contest Charm Me Sponsor Line Gauthier 3rd Place Contest ALL YOURS (May 25) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE Contest 'I' Contest New or Old Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 5:57 AM
Ann, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Gilmour Avatar
September 18, 2021 at 2:13 PM
Many thanks dear Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kauffman Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 10:24 AM
Hi Ann! What a colorful and beautifully crafted picture of the joy we feel at dawn on a clear morning! Love your use of color and the personification! Hope you are doing well. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joyful mornings to you.
Gilmour Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 5:06 PM
Bless you dear Sam for your wonderful words of encouragement. Always good to hear from you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Gauthier Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Lovely imagery, Ann ~
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 10:43 PM
thank you Line much appreciated ~ with love Ann xx
Seeker Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 9:32 PM
Glory of the morn! Congrats on your win, Ann
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:05 AM
Indeed... many thanks for your congrats US, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Roper Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Congratulations, Ann, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery, feel, and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:04 AM
Wow thank you Eve for your lovely congratulations my friend and so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Kendrick Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:44 AM
Very descriptive and expressive work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Thank you so much Sara for your lovely words of encouragement, bless you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 1:27 AM
I never get tired of seeing it Ann, the birth of a new day in all its glory. Hope you are okay and enjoying your weekend. Hope the weather picks up. Tom
Gilmour Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 7:03 AM
Yes it is truly wonderful to see and like you I never tire of seeing the sunrise ~ always different. I hope you too had a good weekend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Buhagiar Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 9:36 PM
You paint a charming picture. It is a delight to read.
Gilmour Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 11:38 PM
Thank you so much Victor, so pleased you enjoyed my words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 4:33 PM
absolutely delightful Ann, a symphony of colour, what a glorious poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 11:39 PM
awww Jan thank my friend for your wonderful words, I truly appreciate them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Pandit Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Delightful rise in symphony of colors--enjoyed the images you created, Ann.
Gilmour Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 11:41 PM
Dear Vijay I thank you for your lovely comments and so glad you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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