Imagery

Awakening to find my room bathed in deepest warmest vermilion Celebrating her rising the sky aglow in vivid magenta and crimson Daily a different artist rejoices painting the sky with joy and elation Delighting in her coming ~ her rising ~ her warmth Like the beat of a drum reaching to a crescendo As that big orange ball truly lights up my soul Written 22nd May 2021 Contest Charm Me Sponsor Line Gauthier 3rd Place Contest ALL YOURS (May 25) Sponsor Brian Strand FIRST PLACE Contest 'I' Contest New or Old Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place

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Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 5:57:00 AM

Ann, beautiful and congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/18/2021 2:13:00 PM

Many thanks dear Constance. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/27/2021 10:24:00 AM

Hi Ann! What a colorful and beautifully crafted picture of the joy we feel at dawn on a clear morning! Love your use of color and the personification! Hope you are doing well. Congratulations on your win. Blessings of joyful mornings to you.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/8/2021 5:06:00 PM

Bless you dear Sam for your wonderful words of encouragement. Always good to hear from you my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/24/2021 3:29:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Ann ~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 10:43:00 PM

thank you Line much appreciated ~ with love Ann xx

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/23/2021 9:32:00 PM

Glory of the morn! Congrats on your win, Ann

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 7:05:00 AM

Indeed... many thanks for your congrats US, with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/23/2021 7:12:00 PM

Congratulations, Ann, in Line Gauthier's "Charm me," contest. Great imagery, feel, and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 7:04:00 AM

Wow thank you Eve for your lovely congratulations my friend and so glad you enjoyed it. I hope you are well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/23/2021 7:44:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 7:03:00 AM

Thank you so much Sara for your lovely words of encouragement, bless you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/23/2021 1:27:00 AM

I never get tired of seeing it Ann, the birth of a new day in all its glory. Hope you are okay and enjoying your weekend. Hope the weather picks up. Tom

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/24/2021 7:03:00 AM

Yes it is truly wonderful to see and like you I never tire of seeing the sunrise ~ always different. I hope you too had a good weekend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/22/2021 9:36:00 PM

You paint a charming picture. It is a delight to read.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/22/2021 11:38:00 PM

Thank you so much Victor, so pleased you enjoyed my words. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/22/2021 4:33:00 PM

absolutely delightful Ann, a symphony of colour, what a glorious poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/22/2021 11:39:00 PM

awww Jan thank my friend for your wonderful words, I truly appreciate them. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/22/2021 3:30:00 PM

Delightful rise in symphony of colors--enjoyed the images you created, Ann.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 5/22/2021 11:41:00 PM

Dear Vijay I thank you for your lovely comments and so glad you enjoyed my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx