Image of Innocence

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She grew up, and was taught that people are good. Nobody would harm her, even if they could. But found as she has aged, not all people are the same. Even best friends, can turn on you with hate and disdain. Yet each new friend, she trusts with all her naive heart. Welcoming each, into her heart is a warm and affectionate jumpstart! 5/26/2023

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Robert Lindley

Date: 6/14/2023 2:04:00 PM

Innocence will always be attacked by those that live to do evil. They are rabid dogs awaiting each new meal. I myself, have seen in many times in my life. Even fought it to help others being attacked. Sad but true, man oft is a thing that thinks only of self. Your poem sings a great truth my friend. A fav, and a gem too.

Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2023 5:41:00 PM

The trick is-- to never give up. Life demands we fight evil, imho. I do so in my writings. Truth, light, honor demands a warrior. Hold high standards or else become like them. Never, I will never be like them. God bless..

Panagiota Romios
Date: 6/14/2023 2:30:00 PM

Sometimes I wish I had an evil heart. Being real in the world is meaningless….being supportive? The prize is loneliness. I too am like you, trying to protect people. It does not work.selfishness, vanity counts more. Loyalty? Is thrown out the door.I learned that here only too.well. Sadly, Pangie xxx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/27/2023 9:13:00 PM

How long will that last? When will future learn from the past? Trusts's to be earned. Hopeful naivete spurned. ~ Just sayin,' P!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/28/2023 12:20:00 PM

I got you meaning. Glad 4 people read this, too. Bless you four for commenting. Humbly, Pangie xx

Elena Eagle

Date: 5/27/2023 4:36:00 PM

A reflective poem. So well done. Enjoyed reading this piece.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/27/2023 5:15:00 PM

Hi, Elena.. Glad you and Michelle got the message! The wise here learned from injuries..there’s much sniveling here about world peace? Yet some do all in their power to destroy you. If a site can’t be peaceful, why blame the world? I know some of the walking wounded here. People that I admire greatly. Loving honest poets! Merci, Pangie x x

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/26/2023 2:53:00 PM

So often innocence is tarnished by the pain inflicted by dishonest people, but to keep a trusting heart shows the true goodness inside~

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/26/2023 3:25:00 PM

Michelle, a brilliant comment! Thank you. Indeed, going on is a must. Hugs, Pangie