Image Moments

pressing the pause button of today, and in an haiku to replay.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/20/2010 1:47:00 PM

I like it, enjoyed!!

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/19/2010 4:15:00 PM

Brian, always a pleasure to read your perfect form, God Bless, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/19/2010 9:38:00 AM

Touche' Brian... so true... just saying "hi" while sunning on the beach ...with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2010 5:51:00 AM

"Pressing the pause button" is a great way to capture an image, Brian. And you're introducing me to a form that is new to me. Thanks so much! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2010 5:24:00 AM

This is very interesting. I have never tried a crystalline. Thank you Brian for your kind comment, I am glad you liked it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2010 3:29:00 AM

Interesting thoughts that you have penned..I could go several different ways with this one in the interpertation...Keep the creative pen flowing.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara