Image In Sand Lattice

With lonely life amidst the breaking waves of the stormy sea
I search in shifting sand lattice for your image etched for me.

October 3, 2021
Contest : Your Best Rhyming Couplet # 2
Sponsor : L Milton Hankins
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Daniel Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 10:27 PM
Very nice, Subimal, congratulations:)
Grasso Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Beautiful, Subimal. Congratulations. ...Fran
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October 6, 2021 at 1:58 PM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in Milt's Rhyming Couplet Contest with this wonderful couplet ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 11:58 AM
Beautifully penned Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Goff Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Such longing, aching in sincerity, is effervescent in this fine couplet, Subimal!
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October 6, 2021 at 9:19 AM
Beautifully-expressed, it caught my attention right away, Subimal. My congradulations for a third out of fifty entries. Nothing to sneeze at! CONGRATULATIONS!
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