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I'M Yours

I'll be your cloud up in the sky, Being all your hopes and dreams... I'll be you angel when you want to take flight, Carrying you through the wind... I'll be your shoulder you cry on, Needing you to know Im here for you... In times of bad news and good, Your pleasures and happiness, Every destruction and broken hearted, I'll be there for you!

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Mario De Paz

Date: 6/28/2013 8:59:00 AM

The poem is OK, but you can do much more than using standard words which can be found in any love poem. I pray you to understand my criticism and accept my advice, or else reply to me defending a different position. My address is depaz.mario@gmail.com

Bethany Nikolassy
Date: 6/28/2013 9:03:00 AM

i do accept you insight