Raul Moreno Poet Quatrain

I'M With Our Redeemer

Mom will you remember,
   All the thing’s we’ve done?
I know I must travel on,
   To Heaven where I’m from.

I know I lived a short life,
   But it was worth the breath.
I was more than a memory,
   But memories are all that’s left.

I’ll always be your angel,
   For this God let me know.
I’m with our Redeemer,
   Where the little angels go.

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Robin L. Gass November 18, 2008 at 6:19 AM This is beautiful, so sad and sweet and true. It reminded me of my "Precious Angel". When I lost my baby, even through my grief, I knew that he went to be "with his redeemer" and my faith gave me strength. I am enjoying reading your poetry. You must touch so many hearts through your work. Maybe someday I will too, if it is Gods will. Robin

Michael Torres November 12, 2008 at 11:20 AM Very sweet Raul and touching. Michael Torres