I'M Twisted

It’s pick on Jan day What else can I say No more will I write I’ll bid you goodnight Maurice, Tim and Cas Have all had a laugh Some fine words they have written In his lastest poem Tim was smitten But the truth it is out So I’ll cry and I’ll shout My real name is Stan I once was a man Jan/Stan Allison 3rd October 2014
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Mcdaid Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 3:48 AM
excellent pen very beautifully drawn jan
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:28 AM
Thanks so much Liam - to understand the Jan/Stan reference you need to read 'Our first meeting on the Isle of Man' which i wrote with Darren Watson. Hugs Jan xxx
Andresen Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 6:40 AM
- I'm twisted.. me too :))) - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend,Jan or Stan :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 4:27 AM
I hope all the bugs are sorted out Anne Lise :-) hugs Jan xxx
Manassian Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:17 PM
Twisted is nice! ;) Hey, Stan...I like your style! ;) Look me up!
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 3:50 AM
Thanks for dropping by Eileen:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Jan, the way you said your last lines, really short like that. It reminded me of Johnny CAsh when he says: My name is Sue. What can I do? Good ending!! You are funny!
Allison Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 3:49 AM
Aww thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:54 PM
Jan or once Stan you are quite the woman...Good night to you we bid you adieu ......hugs Tim
Smith Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 7:03 PM
doot do do do do doot doot do do
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 7:00 PM
So long farewell auf wiedersehn goodbyeeeee :-( Hugs Jan/Stan
Lawless Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Does this mean I don't have to put the seat up??
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:52 PM
LOL John... I do like a twist in the end of some of my writes:-) hugs Jan/Stan xxxx
Baez Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:13 PM
That's one super sized can of worms! STAN/JAN! LOL
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:17 PM
LOL Sebastian please read my poem written with my cyber hubby Darren Watson its called 'Our first meeting on the Isle of Man' Hugs Jan/Stan am I female or really a man LOL xxx
Nance Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 5:47 PM
its all good. we love u :) hugsXxx
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 5:48 PM
Now the real question is Cas is there a twist in this poem or not! Hugs Jan/Stan xxx
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