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I'M Twisted

It’s pick on Jan day What else can I say No more will I write I’ll bid you goodnight Maurice, Tim and Cas Have all had a laugh Some fine words they have written In his lastest poem Tim was smitten But the truth it is out So I’ll cry and I’ll shout My real name is Stan I once was a man Jan/Stan Allison 3rd October 2014

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Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/5/2014 3:48:00 AM

excellent pen very beautifully drawn jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 4:28:00 AM

Thanks so much Liam - to understand the Jan/Stan reference you need to read 'Our first meeting on the Isle of Man' which i wrote with Darren Watson. Hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2014 6:40:00 AM

- I'm twisted.. me too :))) - The network "fell out" at my place yesterday .... only got into my own poems .... much to read today :))) - Happy weekend,Jan or Stan :)) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/5/2014 4:27:00 AM

I hope all the bugs are sorted out Anne Lise :-) hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/3/2014 9:17:00 PM

Twisted is nice! ;) Hey, Stan...I like your style! ;) Look me up!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2014 3:50:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Eileen:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/3/2014 9:16:00 PM

Jan, the way you said your last lines, really short like that. It reminded me of Johnny CAsh when he says: My name is Sue. What can I do? Good ending!! You are funny!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/4/2014 3:49:00 AM

Aww thanks Andrea:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/3/2014 6:54:00 PM

Jan or once Stan you are quite the woman...Good night to you we bid you adieu ......hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 10/3/2014 7:03:00 PM

doot do do do do doot doot do do

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 7:00:00 PM

So long farewell auf wiedersehn goodbyeeeee :-( Hugs Jan/Stan

John Lawless

Date: 10/3/2014 6:48:00 PM

Does this mean I don't have to put the seat up??

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 6:52:00 PM

LOL John... I do like a twist in the end of some of my writes:-) hugs Jan/Stan xxxx

Sebastian Aaron Baez

Date: 10/3/2014 6:13:00 PM

That's one super sized can of worms! STAN/JAN! LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 6:17:00 PM

LOL Sebastian please read my poem written with my cyber hubby Darren Watson its called 'Our first meeting on the Isle of Man' Hugs Jan/Stan am I female or really a man LOL xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/3/2014 5:47:00 PM

its all good. we love u :) hugsXxx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/3/2014 5:48:00 PM

Now the real question is Cas is there a twist in this poem or not! Hugs Jan/Stan xxx