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Im Still Here

Friends one with whom I shared a drink.
Are now ghosts  who haunt my heart dear.
Most left to find that which in life they did thirst.

But with seasons  I did remain like some old pillar unable to 
move.
Feet planted  tears caressing a bitter face hiding 
the fact that  goodbye had come all to soon.

Cards underneath my door.
Unfamilar faces make me question do I exist anymore.

Old passions destroy new flames.
Nights alone cast shadows.
You find more comfort in dreams   

The whiskey that burns is all that reminds.
You haunt this body  like a vacant building  
most seem to ignore  as  they pass its once warm  
structure.

My soul knows midnight my heart emersed in the 
agony of truth.
We yern for warmth in the comfort of pain.

Memories are like scars  a prison of the mind.
Greetings from outskirts.
For I am the at home with the left behind.

Like a character in a novle ment to entertain  im 
lost in the back pages of life.
But if you ever question  just turn back in reflection.
For they may have fled but im sill here.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith Avatar
February 11, 2010 at 8:09 AM
this is a good poem i feel the same even though i have moved away i havent moved up and i miss my friends and happy care free times good write. =) jo
Bono Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 7:19 AM
This is very interesting.I like the way you write.Thank you for your comments on my poems.I hope they aren't to dark for you.Read some more and have a drink on me.Later. Colleen
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November 17, 2009 at 11:48 AM
Greetings John: This poem is AWESOME!!! The way you compare things are very cool. I really like the line "you haunt this body, like a vacant building". Great job. Yours truly: Sheol Note: The reason you have never read my stuff is because I didn't think anyone wanted to.
Loveless Avatar
November 11, 2009 at 10:27 AM
this is...really good john. =/ take it easy with the liquor my friend, i hope your not drinking your self to death. xo Raiin
W Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 11:47 AM
one who has been through trials and errors of past or recent relationships you tell this story so well to just to say say your still here. awesome job.............kate
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