Xuefeng Pan Poet Free verse

I'M Steel Hard

I am not strong, Nay, I am fragile
I am shining  amongst the sunlight 
And rolling in the strongest  Gale

Don't wonder who I am, alas, 
On the beach, I am  standing as such
Facing the rises and sets of the sun
And going  up and down with the tides
 
I am the sands, the broken stones
Which have once been the mountains, afar
Though smashed bit by bit, I am steel hard

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Xuefeng Pan November 26, 2024 at 5:00 AM This piece has been submitted to the anthology entitled Radiant Verses for inclusion, which was recently published by poetrysoup, but failed

Richard Lamoureux August 8, 2019 at 9:36 AM This is an interesting perspective that you share. We do not often think about the beginning of things. Mountains reduced to grains of sand. If hit by lightning it will change to glass. Maybe your title can be Glass Mountain. Xuefeng Pan August 9, 2019 at 9:57 AM Could be... Have a nice weekend

J P Marmaro June 15, 2019 at 10:26 PM An excellent poem, wonderful diction, great technique and imagery! Well done indeed! Xuefeng Pan June 17, 2019 at 12:12 AM Thanks indeed for your valuable comments! Best wishes! Sincerely Xuefeng Pan