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I'm So Jealous

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I'm So Jealous

~The One That Got Away~


Here I lay weeping

I sing a sad song to sleep 

Fire cracking bones

kicking, screaming, pulling hair

The moment, gone forever


~SKAT~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 11/15/2016 2:31:00 PM
Love can sometimes make you go a little stir crazy, eh. A very honest poem that hits home to most of us readers. Love your work, Skat. More love and blessings to you.
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:06:00 AM
Beautiful! I appreciate your welcoming me to Poetry Soup..Sorry it took me so long to respond...forget I had posted here!
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Date: 10/21/2016 12:05:00 AM
Beautiful! I appreciate your welcoming me to Poetry Soup..Sorry it took me so long to respond...forget I had posted here!
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Date: 8/17/2016 3:36:00 PM
Sometimes the best lines come when we are kicking, screaming and then disappear when we look for paper and pen.
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Date: 7/2/2016 3:48:00 AM
I am still here--I went no where NICE
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Date: 6/8/2016 6:07:00 AM
Very vivid and relatable! Love your poetry!
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Date: 5/11/2016 11:13:00 AM
So pictorial and heavily laden with imagery my dear...... Well written piece
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Date: 4/7/2016 4:51:00 AM
It's good to vent, but not to dwell there Skat...
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Date: 2/22/2016 1:10:00 AM
Well done
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Date: 1/19/2016 8:30:00 AM
Beautiful and well expressed lines in their finest. A great and well deserved 7
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Date: 1/15/2016 10:05:00 PM
Hello my dearest friend, Skat! Coming by to enjoy once again this amazing tanka of yours. Jealousy sometimes is hard to deal with..(a Big Sigh). Coming by also to Thank you heartily for stopping by on my poems and your constant support! I love you my dearest friend and sis Skat! me, Leonora
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Date: 1/10/2016 5:41:00 PM
"fire cracking bones " I love that line, every write-up was a hit back to back
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Date: 1/4/2016 5:08:00 PM
The creative mind is singing in this Tanka Skat. You always seem to come out with your own special way of putting the words down. You can paint such graphic imagery with your golden pen, even in such short work as a Tanka. Has to be a seven and a fave for this Tanka offers so much....Vladislav
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Date: 12/28/2015 8:55:00 AM
SKAT, whoa. I was there with you, my friend. From the first line. Learning from you.
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:50:00 AM
your discrete lines filled with sweet smelling ingredients so palatable to the mind are just beyond gratitude and appreciation. This page is a wonder and your poetry speaks volume of creativity beyond physical perspective. keep it up friend and this is definitely a 7.
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Date: 11/30/2015 6:22:00 AM
A feeling well captured.
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Date: 11/27/2015 9:16:00 AM
Hey SKAT!!!!! thank you for leaving a comment on my first poem on here. This is very short, yet to the point, yet very emotional. Brilliant !
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Date: 11/10/2015 2:11:00 PM
Skat, words that bring tears. 11+++ Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/6/2015 12:11:00 PM
"Tanka" for the poem! Terrible pun I know. This was vibrant with us seeing the snapshot of love lost, the pain. Excellent in showing the act of emotion in the feeling of jealousy. In just 22 words you conveyed heartbreak. That's a 7
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Date: 11/4/2015 5:13:00 PM
Nice tanka! Aware of your sadness comes out in tanka. . .
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Date: 10/29/2015 12:31:00 PM
Wow so powerful in such few words SKAT. Yo are so talented I really love reading your beautiful poems. Be blessed :) -LU
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Date: 10/27/2015 11:09:00 AM
Love this thing-of-the-moment piece. Like - it came to me in a flash, the meaning of life, then was gone forever. Great tanka. Love, daver
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Date: 10/18/2015 4:34:00 PM
Hi SKAT you commented on my poems A Monotonous Cacophony and One. I'm new to the community. What are the benefits of becoming a member?
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Date: 10/17/2015 12:39:00 PM
...So moving and touching
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Date: 10/15/2015 5:47:00 PM
Although the beloved, went away Beautiful scenery.
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