I'M Seeing Stars

amidst blades grasses
daffodil unfurls petals
in starbust fashion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Jordan Avatar
September 7, 2008 at 7:25 PM
Katherine you sure painted a beautiful picture with these few words - God Bless to you and Jenny
Spence Sr Avatar
September 6, 2008 at 11:27 AM
You're really getting good with these haiku poems. I really like your CD a lot. I can see the beautiful images in this piece. Great job! ~Joseph
Buys Avatar
September 5, 2008 at 3:15 PM
Stunning and very vivid mental image. Very well done. Regards Heidie
Winter Avatar
September 5, 2008 at 6:47 AM
Such a unique and beautiful thought! I see it clearly! Awesome haiku! Love, Shar
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