I'M Orange

I am not blue today, though I forgot.
I’m orange as the autumn leaves, blown astray:
Or, maybe a pumpkin with missing gut.
Seasons transform and summer fades away,
And seas hold the sun’s flag in disarray.
I hope sister Moon will rise, dressed in blue,
To alight the night with her lonely hue.
Though, I’d don the harvest gown, full and bold.
I miss those red-bikini days, it’s true,
When ideals, like cheap pearls, were bought and sold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 11/4/2011 5:38:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work..Glad that you are not blue but a happy and light hearted orange..Sara
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Date: 9/25/2011 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Dizain" contest Virginia. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations Viginia, on your worthy presentation. Beautiful flow. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/22/2011 11:02:00 AM
Congrats Virginia on an exciting win with this exceptional poetry my friend.. a rare treat...luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 6:32:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in my contest, Virginia
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Date: 9/8/2011 7:07:00 AM
your metaphors shine, virge!... a flowing river of images... winning's best to you! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 9/5/2011 10:35:00 PM
Virginia, this is one of the most interesting and imaginative Dizain I've seen yet! I just love those phrases such as "pumpkin missing a gut" or of ister Moon, alight . . .with her lonely hue" Hope you score big with this one. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/5/2011 12:13:00 PM
A MASTERPIECE MARGARET AND SUCH CREATIVE WORDS AND FLOW.. THAT RED BIKINI MADE ME SMILE A BIT AND THAT SISTER MOON STILL SHINES FOR LOVERS..GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST MY FRIEND..LUV..
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:27:00 AM
nice one here.
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