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I'M On Strike

I’m on strike My muse refuse to write She says I’m crazy A dreamer and a lazy You get it right Don’t tell me what to do Who says you know it all Some mystic with a crystal ball I’m on strike Until we agree on what we write Gone are the days of old One rules and the other does as told I'm on strike A solution we'll have to fight Or my time is over with the pen No more poems like we wrote back then No more pretend We're not acting like we're friends Separated we're bound to lose And be yesterday's tragic news... So until we agree to make it right I'm on strike

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/20/2019 7:59:00 PM

This happens. Just take a deep breath and stop trying to force a poem out. It's like a baby about to be born. They don't enter the world till ready. Besides, God may have something else for you to do.)) Blessings, Panagiota

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/21/2019 5:46:00 AM

I hear you Panagiota...I constantly test myself...I can't be too soft...or I will do nothing... but you're right. you can't force a poem to come out...

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 6/20/2019 8:25:00 AM

OMG, why did I ever sign up for this page...love the video....it's so 'here'...I read this the other night, "The muse is born in pain, thrives on it and loves to inflict it."...oh god, signing off now, Lima Lima Bravo....o happy dagger, this is thy sheaf, let me die...

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/20/2019 8:31:00 AM

ha ha...I'm not going yet...I need a way to break through to the other side...a bridge to take me home...

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/13/2019 6:51:00 PM

Looks like the Strike ended, even before it has begun. Meaning: You and your Muse have created a Masterpiece. :) I knew you would, you could. You done did. Keep that pen flowing, my dear friend. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/14/2019 6:04:00 AM

Well sort of...We're negotiating...If Muse was just a muse...she could do what she wants...but we're together...we must get it right for both...Thank you my friend...You're been kind...

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/13/2019 6:06:00 AM

Excellent. Made me smile. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/14/2019 5:59:00 AM

Thank you Ravi...It says a lot about relationships...All the best my friend

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/12/2019 8:53:00 PM

Is the first time you've been on strike, Arturo? ---Not to worry then: It's THREE strikes and you're out; not one. So, step up to the plate and knock the stuffings out of that stubborn Muse, won't you?! … At any rate, hope you are enjoying the unpaid vacation (LOL). Best wishes, Arturo! ~ Gershon

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/12/2019 9:17:00 PM

That's the way...but Muse can put up a good fight... and we end up doing nothing... I like the three strike system...it's compassionate...better than one and out...

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 6/12/2019 4:53:00 PM

The sweetest and the deepest of work of art you have written, Arturo! I can feel the different taste of your poetry.. a poet on a strike! I enjoyed the read and liked your unique musing.. best regards and blessings.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/12/2019 9:14:00 PM

Thank you Besma...I was trying to find common ground with my Muse...Couldn't write for a while...I think I've unblocked and should be writing again...All the best

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/12/2019 12:10:00 PM

- Your muse are singing ... better than Shakespeare, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/12/2019 9:09:00 PM

A big one is he...Shakespeare...I've been observing him recently...and I tell you...I shut down... what a pleasure it would be to write one as good as he....Thank you Anne-Lise

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/12/2019 11:44:00 AM

LOL...on strike with your muse! Great!

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/12/2019 9:03:00 PM

Thank you Kim...I'm not satisfied with my writing...so I'm negotiating with my Muse...this is a piece of the talks...

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/11/2019 3:42:00 PM

I understand with my muse having been on strike often lately. Well done! Creative poem and a great one :) Keep on writing!

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/11/2019 7:14:00 PM

Thank you Heidi...this muse we exercise...if we can only read it...All the best...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/11/2019 1:31:00 PM

This is a very striking poem, very different with great imagination Arturo - hope your muse comes right! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/11/2019 7:03:00 PM

Yeah...Striking...Thank you Jennifer...I really hope I find peace and love at her shores... I would love to unite with my muse

Jan Allison

Date: 6/11/2019 10:28:00 AM

Made me smile Arturo, my muse is temperamental like a teenager sometimes the words flow or she retreats and sulks in silence lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/11/2019 6:59:00 PM

I understand it more than I pretend...this Muse is a living poem...She will make me happy...Thank you my friend

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/11/2019 8:21:00 AM

I giggled, the whole way through ;)))) Thank You! xomo

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/11/2019 8:39:00 AM

Muse and I are giving me too much trouble...everyone wants to do their own thing...Thanks you Maureen...All the best

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/11/2019 7:19:00 AM

Your muse and you are alive and thriving my friend..enjoyed the read. Keep writing, Arturo!

Arturo Michael
Date: 6/11/2019 8:43:00 AM

I'm negotiating...All the best Vijay