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I'M Not That Strong

I'm not that strong I see it in your eyes...that you're leaving I've noticed that... your smile has already gone In your mind... you must have stopped believing In a love that used to be so strong, I'm not the kind of man, that gives up easily I'm hoping that it's not just foolish pride, In my heart I'm stricken with a jealousy, A passion for you that burns deep inside Chorus I'm not as strong... as you believe So, you're on your way... just let me grieve... You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong You always loved to be the main attraction You loved it with the spotlight just on you with my love, you got no satisfaction So tell me now...what am I supposed to do? I saw you hand in hand with your new love You seemed so happy walking next to him It hurts to know that my love wasn't enough And the chances you'll come home seem pretty slim Chorus I'm not as strong... as you believe So, you're on your way... just let me grieve... You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong You tell me to move on...well, I'm not that strong repeat and fade John Derek Hamilton October 29,2018

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Date: 11/28/2018 9:42:00 AM
John, great lyrics, would make a wonderful country song, well done ~
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/28/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thanks Constance, yeah looking for a singer now actually!
Date: 11/9/2018 1:17:00 AM
Emotional song indeed! Glad it’s not your case,John! Excellent write.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/9/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Susan, nice to have you pass by!
Date: 11/2/2018 10:03:00 PM
This is really good, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/3/2018 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Becca glad you liked it, thanks for passing by!
Date: 11/1/2018 12:19:00 PM
Well, your lyric is certainly very strong, John Boy...another contender my friend...love & light...WW^
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Date: 11/2/2018 1:20:00 PM
Yeh!...I'm waxing them on the weekend lol...^WW^
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2018 5:36:00 PM
Hey WW thanks for the fly by, those wings come in handy sometimes!!lol
Date: 10/31/2018 1:51:00 PM
Enjoyed these smooth flowing lines, John. Sometimes it can be so hard to accept reality and move on; love can't just be switched on and off! Regards // paul
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/1/2018 9:21:00 AM
Thanks Paul, I do appreciate your kind words and visit!
Date: 10/29/2018 5:16:00 PM
Very strong lyrics John, no pun intended. This has a nice flow to it and hopefully you'll record this and share it with us.
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John Hamilton
Date: 10/29/2018 5:27:00 PM
Thanks Chris I'm glad you like it, seems most of my lyrics are leaning to the country side of things, who knew? I grew up hating country music. As for doing the music...well you know how long these things take. Thx a lot, take care John

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