I'M Not That Strong

I'm not that strong

I see it in your eyes...that you're leaving
I've noticed that... your smile has already gone
In your mind... you must have stopped believing
In a love that used to be so strong,

I'm not the kind of man, that gives up easily
I'm hoping that it's not just foolish pride,
In my heart I'm stricken with a jealousy,
A passion for you that burns deep inside

Chorus
I'm not as strong... as you believe
So, you're on your way...
just let me grieve...
You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong
You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong


You always loved to be the main attraction
You loved it with the spotlight just on you
with my love, you got no satisfaction
So tell me now...what am I supposed to do?

I saw you hand in hand with your new love
You seemed so happy walking next to him
It hurts to know that my love wasn't enough
And the chances you'll come home seem pretty slim

Chorus
I'm not as strong... as you believe
So, you're on your way...
just let me grieve...
You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong
You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong

You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong
You tell me to move on...well,
I'm not that strong

repeat and fade

John Derek Hamilton
October 29,2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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La France Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 9:42 AM
John, great lyrics, would make a wonderful country song, well done ~
Hamilton Avatar
November 28, 2018 at 11:23 AM
Thanks Constance, yeah looking for a singer now actually!
Palli Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 1:17 AM
Emotional song indeed! Glad it’s not your case,John! Excellent write.
Hamilton Avatar
November 9, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Thanks Susan, nice to have you pass by!
Teagan Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 10:03 PM
This is really good, John.
Hamilton Avatar
November 3, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Becca glad you liked it, thanks for passing by!
Warrior Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 12:19 PM
Well, your lyric is certainly very strong, John Boy...another contender my friend...love & light...WW^
Warrior Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 1:20 PM
Yeh!...I'm waxing them on the weekend lol...^WW^
Hamilton Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 5:36 PM
Hey WW thanks for the fly by, those wings come in handy sometimes!!lol
Callus Avatar
October 31, 2018 at 1:51 PM
Enjoyed these smooth flowing lines, John. Sometimes it can be so hard to accept reality and move on; love can't just be switched on and off! Regards // paul
Hamilton Avatar
November 1, 2018 at 9:21 AM
Thanks Paul, I do appreciate your kind words and visit!
Green Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Very strong lyrics John, no pun intended. This has a nice flow to it and hopefully you'll record this and share it with us.
Hamilton Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 5:27 PM
Thanks Chris I'm glad you like it, seems most of my lyrics are leaning to the country side of things, who knew? I grew up hating country music. As for doing the music...well you know how long these things take. Thx a lot, take care John
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