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I’m Not a Doctor but

Some fellas and some gals are just plumb mean
and sadly some are deranged and some scream.
  Seems like a certain syndrome 
  is screwin’ with your genomes
and sure would explain that mutant dumb gene!


                Written: March 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Tor Avatar
March 23, 2025 at 9:53 PM
Ha ha ha.. Obsessive behavior and hatred can turn people into experiencing TDS. I think part of the definition should be occurring mostly with the far left political party. Anyone that goes out and burns their 52 thousand dollar Tesla fits the bill for TDS, lol. This one is another favorite, Keith. I hope my friends on the left don't get their feathers riled over my comment. Thanks for sharing and thank you for the laugh... Cheers my friend...
Wolf Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 9:12 PM
You got it, Keith. I think if Trump cured cancer, the TDS-haters would hang him in effigy. If he negotiated an end to the arms race, they would propose an immediate resumption... War is Peace. Stupid is Smart. Progressive is NOT ~ Stuck in 1984
Trestrail Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 11:55 PM
So true. These screamers hate Trump more than they hate Hitler and hate Musk more than they hate Epstein. TDS rots the brain!
Mckeithan Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 6:25 PM
LOL. Well said!!
Trestrail Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 7:50 PM
Hi Oliver, nice to see ya. As the title suggests I have no training in the field of psychopathology but I know crazy when I see it. Cheers.
Lawless Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:03 AM
HEY...I've been screaming at the sky for decades and it hasn't led to any of those other issues...
Trestrail Avatar
March 19, 2025 at 5:16 AM
Scream away, mate, but if you find yourself howling at the moon consult your doctor.
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