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I'M Not a Baby, I'M Three

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My grandson, Brennan

Good morning Mommy and Dad Today I will try not to be bad I don't know what I want to eat No! Not that cereal. It's not sweet Mommy, I don't wanna sit on the baby pot How come you don't have what Dad I and got I need a lot more track to play with my train Mommy, why can't I go out and play in the rain Why does the cat always run away from me I didn't mean to pull out her hair, not really. I need to fix my bike with Daddy's tool Addy is my favorite girlfriend at school I don't know why I got into trouble I just poured out my bottle of bubbles I'm NOT a baby. I'm big 'cause I'm three I gotta go to the potty and make pee pee No. It's not my bath time yet. I don't know when it is. I forget But Daddy, I don't want to go to sleep I can only count as high as ten sheep I want the pajamas with Lightning McQueen He's the fastest race car I ever seen Daddy, read me a story then leave on the light I love you, Mommy and Daddy. Good night ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: June 24th, 2017 Three Year Old Thoughts Contest By: Brenda Chiri

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Dan Cwiak

Date: 7/24/2017 10:00:00 AM

Wonder filled words on this winner! Congratulations Lin.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/23/2017 5:50:00 PM

So cute! This is such a great age, their minds go a mile a minute! Congratulations on this win Lin; well deserved! - Dean

Lin Lane
Date: 7/23/2017 6:57:00 PM

Yes, Dean. Those little minds don't miss a thing and when I look at him I can see his mind working. Thanks ever so much for liking this one.

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2017 4:10:00 PM

I adore the photos he an absolute sweetheart Lin. I hope you give him a copy of your winning poem:-) I'm so delighted to read this again and give you my warm congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 7/23/2017 6:56:00 PM

Oh thanks oodles, Jan. I think he's adorable but then that's as a Gran should think. I sent it to his mom in an email when I wrote it, but I'll read it to him when I see him...soon. Thanks dear sister.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/23/2017 2:47:00 PM

Adorable, Lin! Congrats on your win. Janice

Lin Lane
Date: 7/23/2017 6:41:00 PM

Thank you very much, Janice.

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 7/23/2017 12:11:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Lin!

Lin Lane
Date: 7/23/2017 6:40:00 PM

Thank you, Dale. All I had to do was remember what my grandson said... I could write a book with his words. lol

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 6/25/2017 12:56:00 PM

This is adorable. Very well composed and sure to be a winner. Blessings, Janis.

Lin Lane
Date: 6/27/2017 6:48:00 AM

Hi, Janis. Thanks ever so much.

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/25/2017 8:33:00 AM

Such a handsome young man, Peaches. I remember sitting and reading to my kids when they were that age. They would sit there wide eyed with their imagination turned on. Great time:) Leaves this reader smiling:)

Lin Lane
Date: 6/25/2017 11:33:00 AM

Those are memorable moments, Danny. Brennan is at the age where he likes to tell stories from his fertile imagination, and quite tall ones they are! He thinks he's Super Brennan, so I made a cape for him on my last visit. Thanks for enjoying this one.

John Lawless

Date: 6/24/2017 9:23:00 PM

...wait til he's four and knows even more....good job Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 6/25/2017 3:23:00 AM

I can wait. He's growing too quickly. Thank you, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/24/2017 5:36:00 PM

An absolute delight, Lin! This three year old boy is so sweet...so is his picture! I'm looking forward to seeing this entry on the winners' list. Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 6/24/2017 6:56:00 PM

Aww thanks, Paul. He owns the biggest part of my heart. Just wish we lived closer to each other.

Jan Allison

Date: 6/24/2017 3:44:00 PM

Absolutely charming Lin i can relate to your poem so much it's su h fun with the lines they come out with and what an adorable little grandson you have. :-) hugs Jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 6/24/2017 6:53:00 PM

Thanks, jan, and I'm amazed with his vocabulary. He keeps me on my toes.