I'M Not a Baby, I'M Three

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My grandson, Brennan 

 

Good morning Mommy and Dad
Today I will try not to be bad

I don't know what I want to eat
No! Not that cereal. It's not sweet

Mommy, I don't wanna sit on the baby pot
How come you don't have what Dad I and got

I need a lot more track to play with my train
Mommy, why can't I go out and play in the rain

Why does the cat always run away from me
I didn't mean to pull out her hair, not really.

I need to fix my bike with Daddy's tool
Addy is my favorite girlfriend at school

I don't know why I got into trouble
I just poured out my bottle of bubbles

I'm NOT a baby. I'm big 'cause I'm three
I gotta go to the potty and make pee pee

No. It's not my bath time yet. 
I don't know when it is. I forget

But Daddy, I don't want to go to sleep
I can only count as high as ten sheep

I want the pajamas with Lightning McQueen
He's the fastest race car I ever seen

Daddy, read me a story then leave on the light
I love you, Mommy and Daddy.  Good night


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June 24th, 2017
Three Year Old Thoughts Contest
By: Brenda Chiri

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 7/24/2017 10:00:00 AM
Wonder filled words on this winner! Congratulations Lin.
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Date: 7/23/2017 5:50:00 PM
So cute! This is such a great age, their minds go a mile a minute! Congratulations on this win Lin; well deserved! - Dean
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:57:00 PM
Yes, Dean. Those little minds don't miss a thing and when I look at him I can see his mind working. Thanks ever so much for liking this one.
Date: 7/23/2017 4:10:00 PM
I adore the photos he an absolute sweetheart Lin. I hope you give him a copy of your winning poem:-) I'm so delighted to read this again and give you my warm congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:56:00 PM
Oh thanks oodles, Jan. I think he's adorable but then that's as a Gran should think. I sent it to his mom in an email when I wrote it, but I'll read it to him when I see him...soon. Thanks dear sister.
Date: 7/23/2017 2:47:00 PM
Adorable, Lin! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:41:00 PM
Thank you very much, Janice.
Date: 7/23/2017 12:11:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lin!
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:40:00 PM
Thank you, Dale. All I had to do was remember what my grandson said... I could write a book with his words. lol
Date: 6/25/2017 12:56:00 PM
This is adorable. Very well composed and sure to be a winner. Blessings, Janis.
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Date: 6/27/2017 6:48:00 AM
Hi, Janis. Thanks ever so much.
Date: 6/25/2017 8:33:00 AM
Such a handsome young man, Peaches. I remember sitting and reading to my kids when they were that age. They would sit there wide eyed with their imagination turned on. Great time:) Leaves this reader smiling:)
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Date: 6/25/2017 11:33:00 AM
Those are memorable moments, Danny. Brennan is at the age where he likes to tell stories from his fertile imagination, and quite tall ones they are! He thinks he's Super Brennan, so I made a cape for him on my last visit. Thanks for enjoying this one.
Date: 6/24/2017 9:23:00 PM
...wait til he's four and knows even more....good job Lin
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Date: 6/25/2017 3:23:00 AM
I can wait. He's growing too quickly. Thank you, John.
Date: 6/24/2017 5:36:00 PM
An absolute delight, Lin! This three year old boy is so sweet...so is his picture! I'm looking forward to seeing this entry on the winners' list. Regards // paul
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Date: 6/24/2017 6:56:00 PM
Aww thanks, Paul. He owns the biggest part of my heart. Just wish we lived closer to each other.
Date: 6/24/2017 3:44:00 PM
Absolutely charming Lin i can relate to your poem so much it's su h fun with the lines they come out with and what an adorable little grandson you have. :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/24/2017 6:53:00 PM
Thanks, jan, and I'm amazed with his vocabulary. He keeps me on my toes.
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