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My example poem for the contest I'm running.

I'M No Ballerina

My name is Charles Francis Messina 
I can dance - but I'm no - ballerina 
My toes are too small - and I'd tumble and fall 
Then you'd giggle - like a laughing - hyena 


Example: For my contest
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Romios Avatar
February 8, 2019 at 12:28 PM
Love it Charles. You are a true ballerina with words! And of the heart. Panagiota
Laurie Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Hello Charles … nicely written. Actually I'm like a fairy elephant when I dance, and that's only if someone spiked my drink - eg: a barman with alcohol - thanks Charles - Lindsay
Dietrich Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:40 PM
GREAT example for us. NOW I am motivated!!!
Dutta Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 12:36 PM
Rhythmic rhyme to enjoy a Limerick.
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:58 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Horne Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 9:59 AM
LOL, had a chuckle at this. Loved the contest - thanks on the placement
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 4:59 AM
Thank you, Jack. And You are most welcome, again thanks for entering!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 8:53 AM
Hee hee hee. Cute! xomo
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, Maureen :) xo
Krutsinger Avatar
August 31, 2018 at 12:22 AM
I love the way you have taught us to remember how to pronounce messina. A cute missive for sure, Charles!
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:01 AM
Thank you, Caren. I've heard it pronounced so many different ways...lol
Ashley Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 10:39 PM
You might not be a ballerina, but your graceful charm makes up for it.. :)) Awesome animated imagery with excellent rhythm makes for a smooth giggle-liscious limerick, Charlie. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Such a wonderful comment from such a wonderful and charming poetess. Thank you, Susan. Your comments are as beautiful as your writes. Warmest wishes my dear friend...Charlie
Nicole Avatar
August 30, 2018 at 10:21 PM
:) Thinking of you on your toes, your tiptoes trying to dance. I am softly giggling. ~ Brandy
Messina Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 5:03 AM
LOL- as you should be, Brandy!
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