Newton Ranaweera Poet Limerick

I'M Lovin' It - Tm

She hums "Hmm" on my hymn, "I'm lovin' you"
And runs to crawl in a Delmonte queue
Demanding, "Better befit".
Then cackling, "I'm lovin' it,"	
Gulps my lovely gal there … Delmonte brew.

* A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Dec. 31, 2020)

Dec. 17, 2020
Trademark~~Quintain Poetry Contest
Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Sara Kendrick December 31, 2020 at 9:20 AM Interesting work. I am wondering what that brew is. I did see on TV the other day when given fruit cocktail that had to be used in a meal and in a cocktail how the contestants responded to having to use it but they came up with some interesting meals. Thanks for participating in my contest. Sara Newton Ranaweera December 31, 2020 at 7:02 PM Thank you so much, Sara, for the comment and the congrats!!

Jan Allison December 30, 2020 at 12:50 PM a peach of a poem, i remember the man from Delmonte liked to say YES, lets hope Sara says yes to a contest win:-0 hugs Jan xx Newton Ranaweera December 30, 2020 at 8:20 PM Thank you so much, Jan, for this lovely comment!!

Anisha Dutta December 19, 2020 at 8:32 PM Good. All the best. Newton Ranaweera December 20, 2020 at 1:05 PM Thank you so much, Anisha, for this sweet comment!!