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I'M Leaving

Got my cases packed guess I’m here to say I’ll be back some sunny day Need a break for a few days Life’s complexities hit us in so many ways Taking time out and getting on a plane Need to relax or I’ll go insane Past few months have been quite tough Health has suffered been feeling rough So I’ll say goodbye for a little while With a cheery wave and a sunny smile I’ll still be around so do not fret You’ve not got rid of me quite yet! Jan Allison 3rd August 2014

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Regina Mcintosh

Date: 8/4/2014 10:27:00 AM

So awesome. This is too adorable. Loved it. Happy writing and God bless you.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 10:39:00 AM

Thanks Regina - as you can see I've already been inspired by my journey with my latest poem:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/3/2014 8:18:00 PM

have a relaxing break! i enjoyed this poem very much and look forward to more when you return...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 1:35:00 AM

Thanks for taking the time to comment Ilene i do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/3/2014 7:22:00 PM

Have a great holiday Jan, see you when you come back, lovely little write take care my dear.........Vera........

Jan Allison
Date: 8/4/2014 1:35:00 AM

I will Vera and thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/3/2014 4:07:00 PM

Happy happy holiday..There is nothing more beautiful in life than to relax dear Jan...Im.going to read your past poems till you return..big hugs.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/5/2014 1:59:00 PM

Ow gee..Now Im readimg this Jan.You must have passed through a rough time along with him too..But Jan sometimes Rose petals bloom from rose yhorns..sweety and you are one of the best perfumed flowers who can teach many not to be negative here..hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 4:13:00 PM

I have nearly 200 now Charmaine - can't believe how my husband's cancer journey has brought me on the best journey of my life - i didn't start writing until he had his surgery last November and posted my first poem here in February ! Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/3/2014 12:44:00 PM

Jan....hope you have a great time. You deserve it. You've been through a lot lately. I know you'll be back. You're very loved here...I think you're swell. Do come back when you need a hug! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 4:06:00 PM

Thanks for dropping by Eileen. Hugs always gratefully received :-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 8/3/2014 12:18:00 PM

Take time out. Forget everything. Chill :) We need to do that from time to time. Enjoy it, Jan. And when you get back, do the same and you will see that you have vacation all year lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 12:43:00 PM

Oh a year long holiday not sure I could cope with that LOL a few days break to recharge my batteries is enough for now! Hugs Jan xx

Fabiyas M V

Date: 8/3/2014 10:52:00 AM

It is deep and sweet,Jan Alison

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 10:53:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by:-)Hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/3/2014 10:29:00 AM

Hope you have a relaxing time..recoup! I am going fishing this week , away from everything..no phones! BG

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 10:34:00 AM

No phone but I will have my laptop - I can't stay away too long LOL. Have a great fishing trip that must be such a relaxing hobby. Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/3/2014 10:10:00 AM

Lovely write Jan ! Pack up n health,,Take care my friend!

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 10:33:00 AM

I will enjoy my time out Dr Sharma - we all need to take a break some time and life has been tough recently so it is time for 'me'. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/3/2014 10:01:00 AM

Can I come too ? .....hugs Tim

Tim Smith
Date: 8/3/2014 10:06:00 AM

One day I will visit.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/3/2014 10:05:00 AM

Of course Tim! Wish it was the states I was visiting Tim but it's just the UK for a few days. Wouldn't it be awesome to have a soup party but sadly distances are going to keep us all apart but we can still party here. Hugs Jan xxx