Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

I'M Leaving

Got my cases packed guess I’m here to say
I’ll be back some sunny day
Need a break for a few days
Life’s complexities hit us in so many ways

Taking time out and getting on a plane
Need to relax or I’ll go insane
Past few months have been quite tough
Health has suffered been feeling rough

So I’ll say goodbye for a little while
With a cheery wave and a sunny smile
I’ll still be around so do not fret
You’ve not got rid of me quite yet!

Jan Allison
3rd August 2014

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Regina Mcintosh August 4, 2014 at 10:27 AM So awesome. This is too adorable. Loved it. Happy writing and God bless you. Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 10:39 AM Thanks Regina - as you can see I've already been inspired by my journey with my latest poem:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Ilene Bauer August 3, 2014 at 8:18 PM have a relaxing break! i enjoyed this poem very much and look forward to more when you return... Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 1:35 AM Thanks for taking the time to comment Ilene i do appreciate your support:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Vera Duggan August 3, 2014 at 7:22 PM Have a great holiday Jan, see you when you come back, lovely little write take care my dear.........Vera........ Jan Allison August 4, 2014 at 1:35 AM I will Vera and thanks so much for the lovely comment:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Charmaine Chircop August 3, 2014 at 4:07 PM Happy happy holiday..There is nothing more beautiful in life than to relax dear Jan...Im.going to read your past poems till you return..big hugs. Charmaine Chircop August 5, 2014 at 1:59 PM Ow gee..Now Im readimg this Jan.You must have passed through a rough time along with him too..But Jan sometimes Rose petals bloom from rose yhorns..sweety and you are one of the best perfumed flowers who can teach many not to be negative here..hugs Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 4:13 PM I have nearly 200 now Charmaine - can't believe how my husband's cancer journey has brought me on the best journey of my life - i didn't start writing until he had his surgery last November and posted my first poem here in February ! Hugs Jan xxx

Eileen Manassian August 3, 2014 at 12:44 PM Jan....hope you have a great time. You deserve it. You've been through a lot lately. I know you'll be back. You're very loved here...I think you're swell. Do come back when you need a hug! :) Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 4:06 PM Thanks for dropping by Eileen. Hugs always gratefully received :-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Toquyen Harrell August 3, 2014 at 12:18 PM Take time out. Forget everything. Chill :) We need to do that from time to time. Enjoy it, Jan. And when you get back, do the same and you will see that you have vacation all year lol Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 12:43 PM Oh a year long holiday not sure I could cope with that LOL a few days break to recharge my batteries is enough for now! Hugs Jan xx

Fabiyas M V August 3, 2014 at 10:52 AM It is deep and sweet,Jan Alison Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 10:53 AM Thanks for dropping by:-)Hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick August 3, 2014 at 10:29 AM Hope you have a relaxing time..recoup! I am going fishing this week , away from everything..no phones! BG Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 10:34 AM No phone but I will have my laptop - I can't stay away too long LOL. Have a great fishing trip that must be such a relaxing hobby. Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 3, 2014 at 10:10 AM Lovely write Jan ! Pack up n health,,Take care my friend! Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 10:33 AM I will enjoy my time out Dr Sharma - we all need to take a break some time and life has been tough recently so it is time for 'me'. Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith August 3, 2014 at 10:01 AM Can I come too ? .....hugs Tim Tim Smith August 3, 2014 at 10:06 AM One day I will visit. Jan Allison August 3, 2014 at 10:05 AM Of course Tim! Wish it was the states I was visiting Tim but it's just the UK for a few days. Wouldn't it be awesome to have a soup party but sadly distances are going to keep us all apart but we can still party here. Hugs Jan xxx