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I'm Holding Back the Sky

I wore my longing like a coat.
Kept the sharpest words in my throat.
I leaned in close; the blues just knew,
I would let them bent notes come through.

Bare boards beckoned worn-out shoes.
Slow feet shuffled with the dues.
One heel circled, one stood still,
As the lights turned round like a windmill.

While the dye brush waited by the wall,
I heard the blank canvas start to call.
I held back each splash just enough,
To leave a white whisper, in the rough.

I let my feelings rise up halfway,
Enough to ache; then to fade away.
My heart was folded, tied up with care,
To glow with all that is left hidden there.

The blue kept curling into the white,
Like the Milky Way deep in a velvet night.
The spiral nebulae all slowly grew—
To tie-dye the sky, with an ancient hue.

The tighter the bind, the brighter the bloom.
Stars need darkness, to brighten their room.
Hold back the colour—let just enough take flight.
Raindrops can teach sunlight to shape its light.

When the last slow glow chorus ends,
Twilight mends what that daylight bends.
One lone blue spark escapes the seam,
Just far enough to light the dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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August 18, 2026 at 12:00 AM
The poem's flow is seamless, and the use of personification gives depth to the portrayal of summer. It's a delight to read; congratulations on your contest win, John.
Anderson Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:19 AM
thank you very much. all the best.Cheers.
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 1:05 AM
Beautiful as always. The voice just made it more. Well done.
Anderson Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 1:26 AM
Thanks very much. So glad to hear from you again. Have Fun! Cheers!
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