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I'M Here For You

“Lights out,” his mother told him tenderly each evening when her bedtime tale was read, and she had knelt to gently kiss his head. What comfort given with such constancy! And sometimes when his room seemed shadowy, he’d call out to her in his childish dread. Then Mama came and words of comfort said, “I’m here for you. You’re not in jeopardy.” Before he was a man, she passed away - that mother who had given him much love. A loving spouse and dad and grandpa too was he until his light went out one day! His spirit rose to a new light above; He heard his mama’s words: “I’m here for you.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2020 9:18:00 AM
Congrats on your win with this touching sonnet of the circle of life, Andrea ~ John
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Date: 6/21/2011 11:42:00 PM
we are no.1, heartie.. fine wrritewith congrats! :) huggs
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Date: 7/31/2010 8:21:00 PM
thats so sweet, positive words can be so powerful because they seem to always take away the negative... btw.im back everyday now. my break was great, i guess i missed a lot it looks. ~Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 7/23/2010 1:59:00 AM
Loved reading this again over here :)-- very sweet sonnet that gave me chills with your last lines-- and I see from the comments below you won! No surprise at all! Congrats!! -- nikko :)
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Date: 7/22/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen's contest "Lights Out". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2010 10:43:00 PM
This is so good Andrea. I wonder why it wasn't much higher. But congratulations on your win and a great poem. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/21/2010 9:33:00 PM
o wow, his lights went out and he saw her again, great poem congrats
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Date: 7/21/2010 1:09:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your HM in the Lights Out Contest with this wonderful write.. another honor for u to enjoy my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/21/2010 11:13:00 AM
Seems like loving care breeds loving care. And on and on unto heaven too. Loved this one mucho. Dave
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Date: 7/20/2010 8:50:00 PM
A wonderful poem for the Light's Out contest, Andrea....you have been on a wonderful streak of terrific poetry!! Congrats again!! and ps....thanks for the heads up and reminder on the crystalline!! Don't know what I was thinking!! Duh.... LOL !! I will see if I have time to revise...otherwise...better luck next time to me!! Thanks again!
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Date: 7/20/2010 4:28:00 PM
And I'm so glad that you are! Soup Mail!
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:15:00 AM
Can't believe my "friends" thought it was fine for PD to slam me when I never said anything public against her. Very sad to see you among them.
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Date: 7/20/2010 6:16:00 AM
Beautiful entry for the contest Andrea, hope you're having a great day thus far, luv Wilma
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Date: 7/20/2010 1:14:00 AM
excellent story in poetic terms, love it. Harry
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Date: 7/20/2010 12:03:00 AM
Lovely Andrea, but then it's a sonnet written by you, of course it's going to be lovely. Best of luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/19/2010 2:41:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet!
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Date: 7/19/2010 11:50:00 AM
Wow, this is a lot like my poem you know. Good one. Soup mail!
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Date: 7/19/2010 10:48:00 AM
Dear Andrea: Great poem!!! 7 stars. I would compare you to another poet with this poem, but I could not. You have created this poem with your own fingerprint of creativity. Thank you 4 putting me on your list and reading and commenting on my poem. Only the best 4 U. Sheol
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Date: 7/19/2010 4:23:00 AM
Yes grrrrrrr on me, I haven't been feeling well, things? haven't been getting through the ole noggin properly. Don't wxactly have a support system here out on ship's creek without a paddle...I love your verse above and will try to do better for my friend Andrea. LIGHT..(and send some my way?)& Love
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:49:00 PM
A lovely take on the contest, Andrea. Very spiritually uplifting. Great poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:45:00 PM
A beautiful perspective of a tender memory Andrea, very nicely done in a form not often seen. Thanks for your comments and loyalty as a fan, I can always count on you for a comment of kindness. And you were close, I was listening to "An Irish Lullaby" by 101 strings orchestra. Good luck in Danes contest.
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:43:00 PM
Thanks for all your kind comments, your always so sincere~Thank you for that!!!THIS POEM IS GREAT!!!!A winner for sure , so very nice.Good day to you and God bless~Rick
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:28:00 PM
Great entry Andrea. Yes my daughter brought my computer back last nigh all fixed. I have been trying to catch up today. Tahks for your concern. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:15:00 PM
OK so I missed the July entry deadline.. but already entered my three poem for P.S. contest for November, 2010...so u can do that now too.. did u enter for July? between vacation and other stuff I completely forgot..oh well..was not meant to be .. good going girlfriend.. be proud of this accomplishment... do u know how many poets u beat out? lots and lots... wonderful.. am so happy for u... with luv..
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Date: 7/18/2010 6:32:00 PM
great job on the lights out ocntest!!
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